10 ta 15 lines

due tonite at mid night

3-0 koed

5 to win

ight
heres da flow...

this kid so pathetic, he starin at men, some people refer to him as a 'man' lesbian//1
but i guess i'm alright, since he gay, but this bitch betta watch what he say//2
its funny how he wanna mess wit me, goes around dissin, but boy this is a loss that u been missin//3
ima get this done quick, cuz i do things quickly, cuz i dont stop till my clip go empty//4
he thinkin he can murda me?, damn boy go join ja rule, maybe then people would think u cool//5
see cuz right now i'm aimin, i got it poitin right at yo head, and i'm not fuckin stopin till u fuckin dead//6
im sick of this kid, i'm sick of him tryin to show off, well i'm ready to fuckin blow you off//7
see cuz ur messin with da wrong one, look whos got da gun, its not over 'till that fat bitch' is dead and 'hung'//8
cuz right now i'm rippin, and u tryin to be like ghostface, damn nigga he gives rap a fuckin bad name//9
it looks like u gettin scared, u breathin very heavy, man fuck u ill blow u up along wit ur piece of shit chevy//10
see i could keep going, i could go for hours and hours, i could go silent or i could get louder//11
either way u see this is won, either way u see u lost, cuz after diss i'm not only u masta, i'm ur fuckin boss//12


payce

hurry up and post

i dont feel like it now


ill post later

ight....whenever...

guess u need more time to think of rhymes....:0)

not a bad drop
I'll vote when other cat posts

ight....tell me what yall think of my verse

you need some more complex lines try more multis
and try to get lines to tie into each other
4 lines that ryhme come off much better than just one or two

this kid so pathetic, he starin at men, some people refer to him as a 'man' lesbian//1
but i guess i'm alright, since he gay, but this bitch betta watch what he say//2

Try somethin like this
This kids so pathetic... staring at men, Wyla's the original male lesbian
Not that there's a problem just dont apporach me from the back or the punches will truly start flyin

see what I'm sayin

you got potnetial, just need to elevate

ohh ic ic....thanks, i'll try on my next battle....payce homie

uppin... oh wait he didnt post yet

Were this person at?

ha ha ha....


ight yo yo yo ...

Thinkin youll just "Cruise" with this "mission" but its "imppossible"/
callin your self unstoppable... you should of stop at the table when you first drop em/
and are cappable to relieze that in other peoples eyes your easily breakable/
just a big delemma like theres somethin "up your ass" like an "enmma"/
your lines are gonna get "ripped" apart like i was using a "shredder"/
i anit gonna be "thoughtful of ya feelins" like if i was writing a "love letter"/
dont get scared and "piss ya self" like a "bed wetter"/
it was better off being silent then loud/
maybe you would of walked away from this battle alittle proud/
me pathetic ha.. get off this site and go get some practice or maybe you should stick ta being athletic/ (look at his profile)
let rappin" pass you up" like "runnin"with "micheal johnson" youll never "catch up"/
ya style is lookin alittle "holely" so ya need ta get it patched up/

uppin

get ta votin