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spit.............

ur takin 4ever. i'm off now but i'll b bk in about 3 hours.
hurry up and post ur verse and i'll reply then.

yo ill drop in and vote on the shit when its ready.. for now im out
peace

aight,
i just read ur verse and sounds 2 me dat u dunno who u fuckin wit, i drop this shit so hard u come near me then and ur gonna get hit/
well i must admit, i dont drop as quick as ur mama wen i come round 4 sum fun, all she wants 2 do is take it up the bum/
look at u faggot u like 2 spank monkeys on trees, shit i can rip the shit outta u wit so much ease/
mu'fucka why u wanna challenge me anyway?, dont u kno dat wen i spit i rake in MC's as if it was pay-day/
all u did in ur verse was talk about urself, well all i kno is dat ur gay, suck cock 4 a living and get granny fanny off the top shelf/
sick fucka i'm the one that puts an end 2 ur 50+ ways, shit u cud wank over the same granny 4 about 50 days/
ur a fuckin newbie and ur battlin me, fuck off u cant come no way near, i'll beat u flawlessly/
i'm a sick, twisted mu'fuckin lyrically sound Emcee, this rhyme is 4 fun and i still ripped u easily/
fuck this cat, readin his verse was a waste of time, my fuckin watch stopped wen he tried 2 rhyme/
bitch, please say dat this is gonna b ur last battle, well it must b coz after this it'll b so easy 4 them 2 dismantle/
i kno all ur weaknesses and shit i aint even finished, i'm gonna slaughter u so hard ur just gonna diminish/
fuck u fool, "ur finger clenches the trigger", shit thats been played so much i thought u wud have figured/
well ur only an amatuer so wot can i expect, well i expected more and u aint even earned no respect/
took u an hour 2 pre-write dat shit, fuck i hope u got another way of makin money coz ur rhymes r shit/
ur rhyme like ur mama is in bed, i'm so hot in both departments u both go red/
she can only last a few minutes coz of ur dad, she never been worked like that before so thats his bad/
but hell she aint as tight as ur sister/ fucked me so hard i thought she gave me a blister/
well look here boy u cant compare, shit u got a vocabulary like a 9yr old wit no pubic hair/
well i suppose i best be off 2 so ur mother, hopefully she'll last a bit longer so i can properly fuck her/
so get back 2 spanking ur lil monkey, coz even thats bigger than u and more hung like a donkey//.

u sed 20 bars max so i wrote 20 bars.
yeh good battle.

uppin'

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Both verses came off pretty basic...but face man at least had better wordplay.........

ok now

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vote = ripper

i liked his bars better but both were good

drop a vote on my shit ppl