Good Times are taken for granted in this life we live/

In only a matter of seconds does it go from nega-to-pos-itive/

Remember when you chilled with ya crew?/

You had protection loyalty and love from everyone ya knew/

But then that fateful day came and you made a lie/

And ya friendship loyalty and friends like a flower wilted and died/

You're all alone now in your room jus sleep/

No cruisin, laughing boom gone all in a week/

Words are used as weapons even though not physical/

But it doesnt mean since that you cant see them that the feelings arent invisible/

All you have now is your girlfriend and she loves you/

And you pray to god she stays to hold and hug you/

Simplistic wishes mean more now than ever/

But next time new friends come around relationships do not sever/

For friends that arent reversed enemies are golden/

Jus watch ya past ya old friends remember what ya told them/

God gives you chances open and closed doors/

Sometimes even death does not come in threes but in fours/

The unusual and unexplained is life's toll

Dont let it eat you alive and ruin...Lost souls...

Lonely .....Sad...Heartbroken..Homicide...

Homely...I..hate me....why...Suicide....

Lost Souls lose control through the dark....perished/

So if you choose the light your soul shall cherish...

UPPIN?

yo, it was a'ight.. the flow was off at points.. but I liked the structure and what-not... I don't know, nothin' really to comment on.. I liked the way you set up the end line.. with the mad staggered talk, like you actually had just cut your wrists and were about to die... nice..

return the favour

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This piece was Aight..........