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Old 05-06-03, 02:17 PM   #1
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Evolve[3-0] vs. Triflin[3-0]

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30 Lines Max....10 Min...

Check In By:Wednesday
Post Verse By:Friday
Voting Ends:Sunday

No/Biting/Recycling

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Old 05-06-03, 02:47 PM   #2
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Im in
 
Old 05-06-03, 02:51 PM   #3
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In 20 Sounds Good?
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Old 05-06-03, 03:04 PM   #4
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yeah... sounds good
 
Old 05-08-03, 09:55 AM   #5
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Cherish Your Fights,
There He go Spitten His 2Cents
Yet He Has No Idea
He's Paying A Terrible Price
I wont Devour You,
I'll Beat You with Decency
Im a Pig You Might Aswell
Convert Yourself Into MusLim
Because You Aint Eating Me
Your Punches Never Landed,
Must Be a Delay
Im, Fly. But, Weight?
Your Record Should Be 4w - 3L
Cause I'll predict you'll Get 8.
I cant be Seen Or Heard When I Fire this Stealth
Evolve You Need To Hire Help
I can never Be Schooled, Understand
Im In a Class By Myself
With A BrutaL Force, You'll Get Torched,
Of Course Your not on my Level
You evolved Into a Sale,. Midget
And Sold Yourself Short
See He's Done, Skip The New Pole,
Fuck The 5 Votes His New record is 4-1
Im Considered An Abusive Father
The Way I Beat Son
Im Beaten Him Badly
Let Me Put a End To This Nigga's Show
And Make This His Season Finale
You Never Came into Contact With Dope,
So Dont waist a Line
After we Battled, I threw The Clock Away,
You was a Waist Of Time
If Your Fuse His Hot, Then Use Your Glock.
To Bad You didnt Come Wit Full Force
Evolve You Blew Your Shot...

Trife Stares Down On Evolve After He Got Knocked Out And Says;

Trife Is 2 Hot, I 'll get Rid of you
And Get Tossed in The Flames,
Better Hope Some Archeologist
Will Find Your Skeleton Frame..
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Old 05-09-03, 09:41 AM   #6
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dont vote if you dont understand the personal's and word play


.... im too Heavy for this pest, but this Fly still fell for my Bait
Trife was living a Bug's Life only to get crushed by the Weight//
death is his fate & losing is good... compared to what he's repped
took a Leap into his career, too bad no one cared that he Stepped//
dont worry, your secret is quiet as kept... trust me, i won't tell at all
that you dropped your verse & just like your career, it continues to fall//
some say that the world is Small, but your in a Big world of trouble
imma get write to the Point.. your WACK, sorry to Burst your Bubble//
& this dude knows how to Work the Huddle, Trife loves a Circle of men
plays Tag in a Fruit Loop & can't wait till he gets IT... in the End//
Imagine the win... this is really no time for Pretend cause Reality bites
& this dude always keeps it Real, see Teeth marks in all that he writes//
Plus, look at his style.. do you think that's cute?? so Thin & Narrow!!
i hope you do, cause those are your Chances for winnin this battle//
& stop telling tales of tattle, your whole rhyme scheme is just tragic
dawg, you got no flow... more Stop & Go then all of Rush Hour traffic//
this is not a trick, but it is Magic.. the way i make this Bitch Disappear
Trife is nice at that too... cause Bitches Vanish as soon as he get's near//
now, peep this here.. have to say this & i think you should listen
your not that bad of a writer man............................................... ....
.................................................. ............. when all the ink is missing//
 
Old 05-09-03, 10:17 AM   #7
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Evolve:

now, peep this here.. have to say this & i think you should listen
your not that bad of a writer man............................................... ....
.................................................. ............. when all the ink is missing//

^^^
best line of the battle

Trif:
Fix your structure!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Your flow is impossible to catch reading lines 2 words lng...

plus: didn't see much nice-ness from you

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Old 05-09-03, 10:30 AM   #8
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Hold Up If you didnt understand my structure then you shouldnt
have voted..
Its simple as hell, Take your time and read..lol

For that comment, His vote dont count. Fix my structure? WTF
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Old 05-09-03, 10:41 AM   #9
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whether his vote counted or not is not up to you.... its up to Phrantik or Synikal because they are running the league.... and yes being able to follow your flow will effect the votes... thats part of the battle... its not just punches... so the vote does count..... cause if people dont understand what the hell you are writing then how could they possibly vote for you
 
Old 05-09-03, 10:48 AM   #10
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A good one from Evolve.....His verse came consistent with flow and pucnhes. Triflin didn't have much on this one at all....it got boring readin it after the first couple lines....

I agree with Unemceeable on this line:

your not that bad of a writer man............................................... ....
.................................................. ............. when all the ink is missing//

This line was sick here.....an it was a perfect way to end the battle. Overall....the content was ill and Evolves last line KILLED IT!

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Old 05-09-03, 11:44 AM   #11
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Evolve gets my vote, you put a lot more work into your verse, and it showed.

dont worry, your secret is quiet as kept... trust me, i won't tell at all
that you dropped your verse & just like your career, it continues to fall//
^^Great Line^^

now, peep this here.. have to say this & i think you should listen
your not that bad of a writer man............................................... ....
.................................................. ............. when all the ink is missing//
^^Great Closer^^

All around, Evolve took this one.
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Old 05-09-03, 11:45 AM   #12
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3-0
 
Old 05-09-03, 01:40 PM   #13
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Vote=E..


Tri.. How You Gonna Win With Lines Like These

Must Be a Delay
Im, Fly. But, Weight?

^^Lmao.. Comon kid.


Evolve not a bad verse.. You Got This Shit Easly.. I don't even need to break it down ..
 
Old 05-09-03, 01:43 PM   #14
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Vote : Evolve.

evolve got my vote because he had a better structure, had better punches, nice opener and the closer was a perfect finish.

Triflin : you claim you got alot of talent, now im not judging off your structure but it wasnt RBBL material, you should change your style of set up, and work with flow and stable punches.
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Old 05-10-03, 11:16 AM   #15
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Flow=Evolve
punches=evolve
wordplay=evolve
vocab=evolve

Vote= evolve
 
 


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