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05-06-03, 02:17 PM | #1 | |||||||
. Doper Than You.
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Evolve[3-0] vs. Triflin[3-0]
IP: D0B1 D2B1
30 Lines Max....10 Min...
Check In By:Wednesday Post Verse By:Friday Voting Ends:Sunday No/Biting/Recycling No D/R KnightShade - " This match is for the Fly Weight Belt, the winner gets the belt and has to defend it next week" Last edited by KnightShade : 05-06-03 at 03:05 PM. |
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05-06-03, 02:47 PM | #2 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
Im in
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05-06-03, 02:51 PM | #3 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 7CF8 7E08
In 20 Sounds Good?
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I"ve Been Nice..I took a Leap Into My Career and Made it in one Step -Trife! |
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05-06-03, 03:04 PM | #4 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
yeah... sounds good
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05-08-03, 09:55 AM | #5 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 7CF8 7E08
Cherish Your Fights,
There He go Spitten His 2Cents Yet He Has No Idea He's Paying A Terrible Price I wont Devour You, I'll Beat You with Decency Im a Pig You Might Aswell Convert Yourself Into MusLim Because You Aint Eating Me Your Punches Never Landed, Must Be a Delay Im, Fly. But, Weight? Your Record Should Be 4w - 3L Cause I'll predict you'll Get 8. I cant be Seen Or Heard When I Fire this Stealth Evolve You Need To Hire Help I can never Be Schooled, Understand Im In a Class By Myself With A BrutaL Force, You'll Get Torched, Of Course Your not on my Level You evolved Into a Sale,. Midget And Sold Yourself Short See He's Done, Skip The New Pole, Fuck The 5 Votes His New record is 4-1 Im Considered An Abusive Father The Way I Beat Son Im Beaten Him Badly Let Me Put a End To This Nigga's Show And Make This His Season Finale You Never Came into Contact With Dope, So Dont waist a Line After we Battled, I threw The Clock Away, You was a Waist Of Time If Your Fuse His Hot, Then Use Your Glock. To Bad You didnt Come Wit Full Force Evolve You Blew Your Shot... Trife Stares Down On Evolve After He Got Knocked Out And Says; Trife Is 2 Hot, I 'll get Rid of you And Get Tossed in The Flames, Better Hope Some Archeologist Will Find Your Skeleton Frame..
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I"ve Been Nice..I took a Leap Into My Career and Made it in one Step -Trife! |
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05-09-03, 09:41 AM | #6 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
dont vote if you dont understand the personal's and word play
.... im too Heavy for this pest, but this Fly still fell for my Bait Trife was living a Bug's Life only to get crushed by the Weight// death is his fate & losing is good... compared to what he's repped took a Leap into his career, too bad no one cared that he Stepped// dont worry, your secret is quiet as kept... trust me, i won't tell at all that you dropped your verse & just like your career, it continues to fall// some say that the world is Small, but your in a Big world of trouble imma get write to the Point.. your WACK, sorry to Burst your Bubble// & this dude knows how to Work the Huddle, Trife loves a Circle of men plays Tag in a Fruit Loop & can't wait till he gets IT... in the End// Imagine the win... this is really no time for Pretend cause Reality bites & this dude always keeps it Real, see Teeth marks in all that he writes// Plus, look at his style.. do you think that's cute?? so Thin & Narrow!! i hope you do, cause those are your Chances for winnin this battle// & stop telling tales of tattle, your whole rhyme scheme is just tragic dawg, you got no flow... more Stop & Go then all of Rush Hour traffic// this is not a trick, but it is Magic.. the way i make this Bitch Disappear Trife is nice at that too... cause Bitches Vanish as soon as he get's near// now, peep this here.. have to say this & i think you should listen your not that bad of a writer man............................................... .... .................................................. ............. when all the ink is missing// |
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05-09-03, 10:17 AM | #7 | |||
Like Whoa...
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IP: 3273 E58A
Evolve:
now, peep this here.. have to say this & i think you should listen your not that bad of a writer man............................................... .... .................................................. ............. when all the ink is missing// ^^^ best line of the battle Trif: Fix your structure!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your flow is impossible to catch reading lines 2 words lng... plus: didn't see much nice-ness from you Vote: Evolve |
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05-09-03, 10:30 AM | #8 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 7CF8 7E08
Hold Up If you didnt understand my structure then you shouldnt
have voted.. Its simple as hell, Take your time and read..lol For that comment, His vote dont count. Fix my structure? WTF
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I"ve Been Nice..I took a Leap Into My Career and Made it in one Step -Trife! |
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05-09-03, 10:41 AM | #9 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
whether his vote counted or not is not up to you.... its up to Phrantik or Synikal because they are running the league.... and yes being able to follow your flow will effect the votes... thats part of the battle... its not just punches... so the vote does count..... cause if people dont understand what the hell you are writing then how could they possibly vote for you
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05-09-03, 10:48 AM | #10 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 3479 B0AA
A good one from Evolve.....His verse came consistent with flow and pucnhes. Triflin didn't have much on this one at all....it got boring readin it after the first couple lines....
I agree with Unemceeable on this line: your not that bad of a writer man............................................... .... .................................................. ............. when all the ink is missing// This line was sick here.....an it was a perfect way to end the battle. Overall....the content was ill and Evolves last line KILLED IT! Vote - Evolve
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05-09-03, 11:44 AM | #11 | |||||||
Jee-You Knit?
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IP: F75A 411A
Evolve gets my vote, you put a lot more work into your verse, and it showed.
dont worry, your secret is quiet as kept... trust me, i won't tell at all that you dropped your verse & just like your career, it continues to fall// ^^Great Line^^ now, peep this here.. have to say this & i think you should listen your not that bad of a writer man............................................... .... .................................................. ............. when all the ink is missing// ^^Great Closer^^ All around, Evolve took this one.
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05-09-03, 11:45 AM | #12 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
3-0
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05-09-03, 01:40 PM | #13 | ||||||
Guest
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IP: C97D D2CD
Vote=E..
Tri.. How You Gonna Win With Lines Like These Must Be a Delay Im, Fly. But, Weight? ^^Lmao.. Comon kid. Evolve not a bad verse.. You Got This Shit Easly.. I don't even need to break it down .. |
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05-09-03, 01:43 PM | #14 | ||||
LowerTown's Finest
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IP: F274 351B
Vote : Evolve.
evolve got my vote because he had a better structure, had better punches, nice opener and the closer was a perfect finish. Triflin : you claim you got alot of talent, now im not judging off your structure but it wasnt RBBL material, you should change your style of set up, and work with flow and stable punches.
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05-10-03, 11:16 AM | #15 | |||||||
-Merk Squad-
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IP: 9B91 D0C6
Flow=Evolve
punches=evolve wordplay=evolve vocab=evolve Vote= evolve |
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