I have this feeling inside me
That I have always try to hide
This feeling has never ended, didn’t ever subside
Ive realized that keeping it would only cause me pain
So I tried to forget about it but this feelings always remain
Tell me will I ever survive
Stop my tears from keeping inside
Holding back myself from being close to ur side

Here I am all alone , so lost and full of confusion
Not knowing how to help myself arrive at a decision
I cant get you out of my mind
I don’t know what to do
Its this feeling that’s ever growing
Its this feeling I feel for you

Your’re the one who never let me sleep
Through my mind down to my soul, You touch my lips
Your’re the one that I cant wait to see
With you here by my side , I’m in ecstasy

I am all alone without you
My days are dark without the glimpse of you
Now that you came in to my life , I feel complete
The flowers bloom, my morning shines and I can see

You’re love is like the sun
That lights up my whole world
I feel the warmth inside
Your love is like a river
That flows down through my veins
I feel the chill inside

Every time I hear our music play
It reminds me of the things we’ve been through
In my mind I cant believe it’s true
But in my heart, the reality is you

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damn anotha deep poem keep it up girl u got a talent for tis and tey got such a good point tatu put across and it makes it each one u drop get better and better

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let thy tactix slip life falls apart/


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This Piece Was Really Good... There Was Good Imagery n I Could Picture What Was Happenin... Keep Doin ya Thang Shiz... Dope Piece

I agree with both of the previous posts. Nice work shiz.

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yea mos def this was a nice peice i felt every werd u was sayin and its weird how two ppl can relate on tha same shit....very nice peice shiz keep dat shit up

First, I need to say, you are the shiznit. And I mean that in the best of ways.

Second, your avatar's dancing is creeping me out. And she looks like Sailor Jupiter or something.

And finally third, yes. Yes, in your heart I am in fact the reality. Poetry is always better when it is about me.

Sorry. I had to say that. In all seriousness though, this was a deep poem. It really does capture the feelings of painful love. I liked it. You really are good.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

hmmm.....lookin good with the replies....

it seems to me that there are still ppl who appreciates poetry and i really am glad that u all liked my piece....


bout my avatar thing.....my bad you guys....well imma change it soon whenever i can upload some pics here....cuz for some reason i couldnt upload anything thats why....

well i know i know...she's annoying...and she's kinda of a bit weird cuz u aint really know if she and guy or a gurl...its kinda funny....cuz she does really look like a retard dancing that way...hahahaa

what if i dance that way??....hmmmmm..interesting....

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