20 line max

normal voting rules..
hurry up on your verse

3-0 ko
first to 5 votes wins

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shit, normally I'd rip ya name in the first line.//
but I can't even pronounce that shit.. "no-doe-mic".. is that right?//
'cause on a mic-ya-ain't gettin no doe like welfare cut him off.//
weather I come hard or not this nukka's stay'n soft.//
it's like he got lyrical impotence.. vocals frozen in the off posision.//
chokin' on stage like a fuckin' SARS victem, quarentine his rhymes.//
corner his lines and rasors quick to slit him.//
quick to flip him like he was a gymnast, only in this match he's landin' neck down, all ya hear is a quick snap.//
laughed at, no respect now.. get up before you get down.//
duck, before I spit rounds.. stun crowds with my sick nouns.//
I bunn pounds, you still on ya first spliff.. wow.//
you hardcore-- livin' a hard life, you call that ounce weight, nigga you outta ya mind.//
sellin' nick's an' dimes out tha side of ya school, you ain't a husslah you a runnah fool.//
dawg I'm pro'lly your supply, you my tool, doin' my work for me.//
I spot you out ya l'il bag an' you make me twice the money I paid.//
you my bitch, try'n say you not.. bitch I grab ya tounge with pliars squeeze down and pull tha mutha fucka right out.//
let's see you try'n talk now, lay everythin' you got down.. you still beat harder than my dick in a dry spell.// <--- haha
there ain't gonna be no reply, baby.. just sit there and cry now..

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..'Slit yah Wrist', Yah Punches is No Land like a 'Water on Fist'..
..Yah 'Weak on MettaPhores' Simialar to 'Talkshow Hosts' wit no 'Conversations'..
..Your rymez aint taking 'You no where' Like 'Foney Aligations'..
..'Blunt Mc is only Felt' when Smoked, 'Release my Demons' Im Feeling 'Prevoked'..
..Half of ur 'Rymez are ELEMENTARY' and 'Ritorikal',hits non 'Mettaphorikal'..
..Blow the a 'Whole in tha left side of ur brain' so u can think 'RIGHT!'..
..Gash ur 'Sight', You 'take it anal' so how u Supposed to be 'Tight'?..
..Hit n 'Spite' this Fagz talent aint even 'iight'..
..'Got u Sweeten TRIGGas' Ur Assed out like Thongs on 'Fat Niggas'..
..Spred 'Wealth' like 'Nursing home Facilitys', Slept on like 'Animal Trankwillitys'..
..hot wit 'Flow' now were not talking about Blunt mc, this kat still aint 'Lossed his Vergenity'..
..Surrender-b' Cuz ur Going no place like Parked Cars, I must got the Devil as a Ghost writer cuz i sertinaly got 'Sparked barz'..
..I got 'SickIntentions' to leave u 'Decapated at Elderly Conventions' you cant "Hold My FLow" Like "Water PISTOLS WIT SUSPENSIONS" ohhhhhhhh..
..ILL wit Bic's and 'Pens' Light "Contraversy in Friends" like 2 oppisits "Decend"..
..Hush ur Mouth I recomend, Cuz im just 'Blazin heat', I will tell u now, "PUSSY U JUST MET DEFEAT"..

uppn for some votes

nOdOm!C got this 1 he came with better metaphors and more punches

1-0 uppin

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nOdOm!C

2-0 uppin for tha win

up!

uppion

1 more vote

WTF? SOMEONE VOTE!!!!!

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