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here i am!

r u gonna go first?

here we go
Aye yo what you here for you got a talent simmilar to tha number zero/
What the fuck you just another gangsta actor like robert de niro/
YOur rymes are that bad when you spit its a public attroicity/
My style electrifys you like a million volt velocity/
Yeah im young to but i wouldnt put it in my name/
Braggin bout how your rymes would put any other 5 year old to shame/
im A EMBARRASE YA you like a lion without his mane/
(In otherwords like a man without balls)a female/
Look at you you look pale at the though of goin toe to toe/
Scared dont understand whether you want me as a friend or foe/
Jeez wit a record like yours you must be proud/
You rap good if you didnt make a sound/
Well all igot to say is that the pedophile in da park liked the fact he was yung/
Times over bitch, child prodigys times over wit ya rap career you just got stung/

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trech p/ your neglecting to see!/ that your name alone it's own trechory!/ cuz when i get through with you, you'll be soaked in your own shit and pee/ P!/ you said "My style electrifys you like a million volt velocity"/ while that's just a bad imitation of a try at lyrically mocking me!/ you couldn't produce that much energy if 12,279 hundred enormous electric eels crawled up your ass and shocked ya!/ in this battle bitch you's the broad!/ deformed life-form with three tits and a bra!/ banging your anus while trying to type quick/ biting your lip and telling me you liked it!/
All excited by a YOUNG Dick that you was riding!/ colliding with me will leave you enlightened!/
Roasting your ryhmes and striking your surface!/ If you's in second/ NO need to tell who first is!/ hot, murderous verses, dispersing/ leaving a feeling of serious nervousness!/ Cuz when i'm battling on RB i come equipped with raw spit/ to hock at your bitch!/ Baffle and gaffle her then get from the scene, lickity split!/ Tretch P/ who did you think you was fucking with?/

then throws Trech P a dick to nibble on

check this shit out


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43182

young DEE too it his shit wasnt as played n as gay as treach;s shit

vote -young

well young D made 1 very important mistake
"banging your anus while trying to type quick/ biting your lip and telling me you liked it!/"
what the fuck was that ru a rapper or a poofter

treach P had a good punchline
"Braggin bout how your rymes would put any other 5 year old to shame/
im A EMBARRASE YA you like a lion without his mane/"

but except fo that treach had nun else no disrepect treach u just need mo punches

vote = young dee

Treach's drop was aiight...Youngs looked alright till I got to here..

"you said "My style electrifys you like a million volt velocity"/ while that's just a bad imitation of a try at lyrically mocking me!/ you couldn't produce that much energy if 12,279 hundred enormous electric eels crawled up your ass and shocked ya!/ "

^^This whole section here^^ turned me right off your verse, in the first bar, you fed, which is known everywhere as very weak and then you proceeded with really cheesy attempts at punches...You gotta word shit better...And you have to structure you're whole verse alot better its fucked to read the way you got it...But learn from these mistakes...

Vote= Treach P...

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vote=treach
nice shit, good punches flowability and consistency
nice battle though
check my shit out though
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=42970