Yo...

This verse is dedicated... To all you fake ass MC's...


Ayo, peep the realness
Wounds so deep medicinals can't heal this
You ain't gotta live a certain type of life style to feel this
For real, it's kinda fucked how the game's gotten
Fake dudes talkin real... Leavin brain's rotten
It was a cold October, water turn to ice on my sweater
Arrive home, mail box, seems I got a letter
"Meet me under Louis bridge, bitch, see what happens"
I grabbed the glock, said a prayer, felt a need for clappin
Didn't call my boyz, didn't know the situation
Wouldn't wanna be responsible for more grave ingravings
Near midnight, got my heat gripped tight
Heard a creeping sound to the left, so I slipped right
Whispered voice in the shadows "You stupid to show up..."
My only thoughts... I'm gonna die before I even get the chance to grow up
I slowed up... Too much anxiety, I might blow up
Couldn't take the shit no more... Here comes the throw-up
Behind me, heard a click, oh shit, I turn round
Wide-eyed, fear-gripped, as a rat scutters 'cross the ground
Then in the distance, I see this motherfucker scurry
I could've sworn i heard a laugh... He think this shit is funny?
No more fear, just rage, I jump up and bust shots
This shit is self-defense, fuck courts, fuck cops
BAM! He's hit once in the neck, and twice in the back
I creeped closer, making sure he's in a permanent nap
He's lying on his stomach... I started to cry
Turned him round on his back, looked into my brother's eyes
"I was only playing, kid... Why you bring a gun?"
I dropped to my knees... What the fuck have I done?
The look on his face destined to haunt my nightmares
No hope, ya'll... I lost my brother right there
Go back to the topic, read the headline straight up
'Cuz this whole story was fake, all made up

Don't believe everything you read.

PEACE.


holla at ya kid

yo not bad nice flow all bruatally true.

return da favere ......http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42988

Yo this piece was cool u know? It was cool for what it was made for. I'm pretty sure u wanted it to maybe quote as a serious type flow.. that was cool , it reminded me of some ol' Mobb Deep ish
for real.

keep posting

this was an alright piece it really started tellin the story but the way you ended it took that away. i thought that you could have added more to it to say somethin about the similarities of this and fake emcees just to get your point accross i mean the flow was good and so was the detail but the topic wasn't given justice but other than that it was ok

odd gives it
3 1/2 mics of 5

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even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

Nice drop kid...I like it a lot...Twisted ending, and that shit was ill...Keep spittin...

it was nice but you went from wack mc's to shooting my brother to don't believe everything you read. i agree with oddily ill, show the connections.
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On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll

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yo i was feelin dat shit, had a nice flow.
keep spittin

nice drop brotha, u must a been pissed when u wrote dis shit, nice lines in dere.....much love

Ha, ha....nice concept....oh yeah be proud of where your from....your region doesn't dictate ya style....up north style? down south style? cali style? if you dope your dope...

i couldnt feel nun of that shit that was FUCKIN WACK, fuck u wanna be gangsta rappers like i said many many times befo RB is not a place for gangsta rappers, what the fuck did that have to do with fake MC's ur the only fake emcee is see cuse u decived ppl into peepin this shit

this is a thread i made like last month called FAKE EMCEES and its on that one topic
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=trill