here's somthin new i wrote so plz give me feedback


i'm that nigga back from the dead/
you know the nigga that got shot in the head/
i'm a ghost i ain't got no reflection/
the niggas i'm after ain't got no protection/
cus i can't die again but i can pretend/
i know i will offend them and they will defend/
hate to brake it to ya but this is the end/
i've been waiten for this day to get revenge and take ya life/
nigga i'ma end this strife i don't care if you have a wife/
so watch ya back, day or night we gonna have a fight/
you niggas ain't gonna win so don't even try a'ight/
you niggas thought i was a fake and now you made a mistake for assuming/
when you see me i'm everywhere it's so confusing/
i got you where i want and now you loosing/
now ya niggas recognize i can see it in ya eyes/
i know you regret it cus i can hear it in ya cries/

plz give me feedback

uppin

well first when u wrote this u probably thought that this was the most gangsta the most exclusive illusive shit eva.....i'm sorry to break it to ya but this was wack...
how many times do i have to repeat my self RB IS NO A PLACE FOR GANGSTA RAPPERS,
night a'ight that was wack that was the most simple fuckin vocabulary used eva,
u probably thought that protection n reflection bit was ill wel it fuckin wasnt poof,
loosing confusing haha dont even think about doin it again

whatever dawg i haven't written in awhile so i've been rusty but i guess you haven't seen my other shit