ok dawg you spit first.
unlimited lines
unlimited votes
there are crew votes, b/c this is a tryout
no hater/dick ryder votes tho
PLZ MAKE ALL VOTES WELL EXPLAINED!
3 - 0 = KO
5 - 0 = MURDA!
you spit first

ayo, this will be your tryout for the War Lords k? so go all out dawg

yo this should be a pretty personal battle cause we are good friends, so im thinkin this sould be a deep one.

kiss my ass... ur lips must be puckering,
there is no peace,
let the heat excessivley bleed,
how hard can a exerection be?,
when i talk you can touch this,
i lay down emcees like a mosh pit,
im like that substance,
id rather be dead and let my lyrics speak,
actions that have a unique technique,
yo whipped off you woman but hide and seek,
so to speak,
i put all down like a medievil greek,
scared to see im having crazy dreams,
but i devour u intirally like a horra flick movie,
you taught u was winning but its going down stream,
ill spit verses tag teamed,
rippin eric estrada on prime time t.v,
i just.... conduct bitches like flocks,
adjust ur balance cause im bringin shocks,
faded like uve sankin in whiskey on the rocks,
but i potray the game like a engine block,
im a flow master like an exhaust,
so stop running like the capital of iraq,
but ill stop and let the voting stock,

i know you my boy, but choosin me to battle got you in deep\\
cause ur rhymes is like an old dog, need to be put to sleep\\
i know this is ur first battle, and you new to this whole site\\
but the time it take you to write a verse, is longer than an international flight\\
ur technique aint unique, it just so outplayed, that no one usees it anymore\\
its like the off brands of cereal, that you can buy at the grocery store\\
u wanna see how hard an erection can be? here, just open your jaw\\
i'll have you see'in more dicks than if you were in an all male spa\\
you use alot of metaphors, but how many even make sence\\
cause i get lost readin them, you have so many condensed\\
its just like 20 mexicans living in a little 2 room shack\\
packed in so tight they cant move, havin anxiety attacks\\
we went over the border, and smoked out a mushroom cloud\\
but since you are mexican, when we tried to get back over you werent allowed\\
they put you in a mexican jail, were you met your boyfriend tito\\
and now every single night, you suck sour cream out his burrito\\
its fuckin 3 30 in the morning, and my eyes are half closed\\
cause i didnt know castillo would post, right when the battle was imposed\\
he sure has energy, now thats what i call a hyped up newbie\\
too bad he spends all his time watching generic rappers on MTV\\
well im off to bed, so i can get sleep, and dream about whatever\\
i didnt write that much, but im pretty sure castillo wont get any votes whatsoever\\
goodnight little punk, you just got merked? can you tell me how it feels?\\
"well i dont think it was fair, lets take it to the court of appeals"

that was the worst shit i have ever written, but it IS almost 4 IN THE MORNING!!!!!!!! lmao night uppin fr this

uppin here

uppin

ILL mental got thiz.......deffinitly but the performance of the other dude wusnt bad he just need more practice i say.............and yea holla at Mic check.......

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ok so 1 - 0 uppin

Ill-Ment took this battle, had good disses and I felt his punches more.......

Castillo had a good verse but it died down towards the end,
work on makin ya disses stronger......flow was good tho!

vote Ill

I also poll voted!!

ok 2 - 0 still uppin

those were the nicest lines out of that whole battle, notice that none of them came from castillo, and most of ill's punches were personal which made it even more interestin to read

and as for castillo, those were some weak ass lines, they were more generic than shaq sneakers at k-mart lol i think u shoudl pick up a new hobby

vote=ill mental

oh and tonya, i need ya aim name cause i gotta talk to u

ill mental all the way!!!