man i spit so good looking like i commited a crime/poeple trying 2 excuse me of being busta WITH MORE ryhmes/but im only a 13ad {habbit} thats how i do/ man stop trying 2 bust boi its hurting u/im the new kid on the block here in the site/i c u over there bustin on me tryin 2 bite/ but every time i get u on its the lock down/u sound like a broke down snoop dowg wit out the sound/bring u bac turn ur rymhes ^ side down /now im not only new im here for u now giv it a holla/im leaaving strollin poppin my colla

.........hey yeo that was jus a preview dogg i can do more but im jus wurmin ^..iight so yeo giv me the 411!

u need to work on dis ,,, its really whack ,, i wasnt feelin it , , , and dont type ur verse in paragraph form , , , elevate dawg ,, elevate ,, ur lyrics are too simple

lotta work needed, ive heard those rhymes a million times..... not too original yo

yo habbit ! this is sway ur brother u needa lil werk ! jus hit me uip

thanx yeo thats wut i wanted here somegood criticism.....but hey yeo.....there is a lil more 2 where that snack come from so ummm phillis phinest wit me ^ and some poeplez giv me a holla!