There's 3 parts to this, got most inspriration to write this from Juice - Sincerely Unsigned.....this isnt the most complex of songs but this song is not from the brain. Cuse its too long i'm a post this in parts

(Unsigned Peeps)
Forever remaining unsigned unfound by the industry,
Cats making they own labels n dealing tracks individually,
Working late night shifts n writing in-between breaks,
Only getting one chance to prove themselves no second takes,
Some cats don’t want fame only acknowledgement n a little recognition,
Some just dream all day about being in a label workin in a high position,
Emcees aint getting signed it aint cuse they un-intelligent,
They spit the dopest shit but they song topics r still irrelevant,
The industry don’t care about yo battle scars not even if you got evidence,
N I’m a make this evident, not all cats work to get the president*. (*money)

Chorus:
Dope cats gunna remain forever unsigned that’s what they get fo not being unkind,
Doesn’t matter how smart your intellect,
True emcees will neva get their proper respect,
Cats like me aint afraid to show they approbation fo admiration,
The dopest cats will remain the dopest but only in they own nation.

man how can yaw sleep on this

this rap was really good

^^what a horrid reply...

yo dunny that shit got me thinking a lot yo...i really enjoyed it...the topic was great, the word play were diseased, and its wasnt too short but it still got me fiending for the other parts....i could make you an amazing beat for that drop....as always you droppin that hot shit....wahid

it was tight, , , , , ,but u only had one verse , ,, one verse , ,, damn dawg , , ,, u should have put 2 verses , , , , but overall tight shit

That was tight but like Bash said u shouldve did two verses

tight drop!

Forever remaining unsigned unfound by the industry,
Cats making they own labels n dealing tracks individually,

nice drop man......
solid flows, good imagery and use of wordplay

yea , should dropped a 2nd verse but keep them rhymes comin yo