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Old 05-05-03, 08:08 PM   #1
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Dear John letter

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yo man this is one of ma first ever that i wrote check it out an hit me back bout it i ant opinions good and bad i dontcare not that youd hold back


just like tupac i thought i had them but they had me in tha long run
but now i got him cause i see him from down tha barral of ma gun
He knocked me up then he bounced onto ma gurl chantelle
leavein me broken hearted wit a baby n a ticket ta hell
but yo if im goin he goin ill drg him down every metre
hear him screamin fo some mercy as we get down deeper
i wanna ake him feel tha way a do
dont ya kno boy i cant live witout u
if ya make me pull tha trigger on yo sorry as right now
ill turn tha nine upon maself soon as yo ass his tha ground
ma baby in ma belly only thing that keep me going
you stand there shakin crying not knowin
what tha bitch gonna do next where this gonna end
it ends now nigga i wouldnt want you back even if ya begged
see ive thought it all out now and im better of witout chu
i dont want no scrub eatin off of what i got ta give
and the best thing for everyone is if you cease to exist
Steven a lovedyou man why didnt you see
i was tha best thing for you, You were tha best thing fo me
you opened ma eyes to tha reality of life

the reality is devestating crushin ma bones in ma body
yo got nothing left but yo baby in ma body
wonder what it would say if it could speak to you rite now
would it ask you questions or just staight up ignore you
if i was it i would cause you nothing but a low life
creepin round screwin men and beatin on yo wife
you mean nothing to me anymore i see you for what you are
so im leaving rigt now and im takin yo car
Dont you dare try to tell me to calm down and talk a minute
cause frankly i dont care and ive had it with yo bullshit
im gone you had your chance wit me you did nothing but blow it
so go back and blow your brother
as far as im concered ma baby have no father
theyll never kno yo name or even what you look like
dont come to close to him nigga dont want you fuckin up their life
just like you did mine next time ill no better
thats the last line of this fucked up dear john letta
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Old 05-05-03, 08:14 PM   #2
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Nice , Nice , , ,i was luvin this piece , , ,, overall 7/10
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Old 05-05-03, 09:10 PM   #3
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Tight it was tight
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