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Old 05-04-03, 11:24 AM   #1
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Deep is the ocean's floor the same way the endless fight for survival of the poor.../ Uncomfortable sleep on the concrete they snore../ Laying like a dead fish washed into the shore../ Unlock this stargate seal to keep it real on this side of earth's demention../ Its a fucking crash coarse and we dummies waiting for the suspension../ Hit you hard when the impact tears your body apart and seperate your mind from yo heart../ Crack and Deseases are in the start, while they run to the finish line to win 1st place on the disposal chart../ We dying slowly, in a ghetto left lonely, barbed wire wrapped around nick foley..Blood sweat and tears everyday in this part of town aint glitters and gold like bon jovi../ Muthafuckas on the otha side of the bridge think they know me../ What i wear or look like shows my persona as i'm riding../ Looking at me using racial profiling../ Fucking college frat boys cant make a louder noise as i kill em all screaming and dying../ Head frying, you rich and i'm not, so i ain't lying..,You got it all and i'm waiting on the corner incognito eating chilli fritos.../ I'm mexican so dont compare me to tacos and burritos just because we make delicious food,and yall drive ugly ass beatles..Taste my rainbow when i shit skittles all over any wack m.c's riddles because this shit is critical and supported by my life.../ I got you stuck and held hostage with a plastic knife, from dinner, and my gun is a butterfinger../ Give chase driving my chevy, meadly so deadly, so get ready if i smash into your coup with an ice cream cone doubled scooped../
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Old 05-04-03, 11:28 AM   #2
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nice drop...i enjoyed reading this right there...kinda morbid and thats what made the rhyme smooth...nice choice of words and i liked the word play...overall i'd give it a 8/10....nice drop dunny...wahid
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Old 05-04-03, 12:08 PM   #3
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Thank you.. I appreciate your opinion my friend same way in the future, i'll do the same thing for you..
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Old 05-04-03, 12:19 PM   #4
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damn. how many internet capable
homes are there in south central
los angeles. i didnt think the funds
were sufficient for such nice
technilogical advances that we have
made....your not fucking from there
dont lie.

nice drop. seperate your bars..instead of
a paragraph. write it like i wrote this.
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