bitch who da fuck r u, coming round here messing wid my crew/
we aint restin, so stop testin, cus we only into bestin/
we wright deese dope rythems cus we aint gotta clue on yo cumfy life's and yo 9 ta 5's/
da only thing we live for is ryming, getting up in da am writing a flow/
we all just letting are inards flow, making yo minds blow/
we all sick yo dick shit, rap is immorale, rap is cruel, i just dont think u understandin dis game is our lifes/
we dont come up in yo face and diss yo sweet little family lies/
g's live yo life how u wanna, think its kool/
go home in da evening and tell da wife u had a good day, sit and chat wid yu kids, ask how they bin at skool/
when was da last time you spoke da truth, told it how it really is/
when was the last time you spoke from yo heart, not holding back incase you gota wack/
dawgs u live in a world of oppression, yo aint got no way of exspressin/
they tell me dis world is free, they tell me im free/
i say fuck dat shit dawg, i see da big picture/
i see wat da goverments are up2, i see dis world for what it is/
gee the rich get richer, and the poore stay poore/
i would love a porche or a ferrari, but no i cant i gotta settle for my feet still walkin dis beat, all u can say is look at dat dead beat/
my aspirations aint no differant from yours, i wanna big house, a boat and all/
i whant holidays abroad each year, i whant a real fine broad on my left/
so you see dawg we aint dat differant, i just found a way to be free, if only for a few seconds when im making my shit/
but dose few seconds are as preciuse as my kids, i say what i whant, i act like i whant, i flow how i whant/
but den da next day comes a dawnin, i gotta get up early in da mornin/
just to go earn some wage for da goverments to keep me from leaving/
if a spaceship came down dis morinin, i wouldent still be yawnin, id be boardin/
takin my flow wid me, going off to a whole new show, where i aint getting dissed for my music, where i aint getting opressed for breathing/
bro id be uppin n leavin, revilin in da feelin.

well could use some vocabulary somewhere... needs a better flow to it I couldn't really feel this one.. and keep elevating OoNnEe

yeh sheshe got that right........elevate.......

uppin for responce and advis.

this drop is one of ur best pieces ,, , , nice shit dawg

thanks Bash, lotta respect to yu foreal.

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uppin for comments dawg's

yo dawg this is sway ! that drop was nice! i was feellin it ! i liked it ! go cheack out my new drop its in open mic ! iight tell me how it is