Soilder22:
sigh...)the same ol shit, day afta day, i slowly start to decay/
seein my motha cryin on da couch, me workin on bills to pay/
like im experincing a snow fall, while im in da month of may/
cryin myself to sleep every night, layin in bed as i twist & twirl/
there i was a 14 year old boy alone, trapped in his own world/
watch my brotha quietly, as he sleeps alone, in dis empty pad/
im tryin to be his father and brotha, two things he nava had/
i gotta hold on to my life, i need this, yo i cant give up/
i jus cugged my life, and yo its time to refil my cup/
gotta carry on, neva stop, a yo tha wheels keep on turnin/
had a fire amongst my heart, now im bout to make it quit burnin/
im bout to wipe these tears off my face, and make my stand/
a yo im walkin onprivate property, but im walkin on my land/
ill do what eva it takes yo i aint goin quit, im still rappen/
i talked about this 4 far 2 long, now its time 2 jus mak it happen...

chorus:
God blessed us wit our skills/
But our personality is 1 of da darkest shadows/
Creative mind that finds our vision’s twisted/
Xorcist optics I borrowed/
we've seen the sleep that’s hollowed/


Bash:
Under blue crescent moons..
I heard peaceful tunes through my Mom's blessed womb..
Eastern Sea Board thunderous storm "Bash" was born.
1981 Month Valentine, Zodiac sign Pisces design, birth was mine..
I Un-masked the blind, Analyzed the sands of time to find righteous bass-lines..
Screaming sirens and Subway-Trains maintained my brave mind-frame..
Street guitars crashed the thick glass black mask..
That thrashed my vision past the worlds last laugh..
Kidnapped from Christ, my faith was sliced by Satan's advice..
Lost confused & bruised..
The knowledge of Hebrews let me see-through the lies of lethal-people..
God-Body sequel episode two, Spirit enhanced Sun Tzu Si-Fu..
Dangerous chambers held in the hands of adolescents..
Peasants taught Extravagant-lessons in the days of knuckle-flesh-weapons..
Staring through Binoculars on Mount Hebron I see the war of Vietnam..
Calm palms felt the Napalm Bombs from the wisdom of Psalms
Rocking cradles to Motionless caskets, Judgment Chances..
Guillotine axes chase Atheists & Baptists..
I've valued false jewels, utilized useless tools in pagan Schools.
I've Mastered the intelligence of Righteousness with no arrogance..
Hence the past tense to understand my dense to intense Sick sense..
Auto-Biography symphony self portrait imaginary, 21 years of misery/

uppin for some feedback

DAMN...let me say dat again DAMN.....bash u riped it up.....we riped da shit....no,no....YOU riped da shit....much RESPECT fam.

yo i was feeling bash's verse way mo then sldier's,
well bash that shit was dope but soldier u need ta work on yo rhyming sun

chekc my shit out, its called "How I'll"

thanks dawg ,,,,,,,,,,,,,uppin

ya....i knew it...fuck i was in writas block yestaday, and kinda today....bash's verse was so good it made me look stupid....haha sorry bout dat bash u shoulda took this one cause i ruined it 4 u...lol well still uppin...peace eazy

This wuz tite...Really lieked tha concept...good vocab n wordplay from both of y'alls..Nice drop

aight we gotz sum replies but tha rest of u quit sleepin......

uppin , ,, dont sleep on us now

uppin

come on now , , ,give us some feedback

i agree with stledgends that rap was good i liked it a lot the second guy was better

thanks ,,,,,,,,,,,,,uppin