aight this is my first topical drop on my album "XYZ"


[Hook]
This is an uphill battle//
Struggling up the ladder, looking for a handle//
Something to grab on to, something to grapple//
Everybodyt his is an uphill battle

Picture this: a young boy still wet behind the ears//
Trying in the rap world getting nothing but jeers//
What the fuck would you do? Give up?//
Drop all your dreams and say enoughs enough?//
Nuh uh, no way not for this cat im trying//
Im goinna suceed or while i trying im dieing//
Cuz I can't give up... can't take this rap world and quiet up//
Imma speak my piece even f i get shot up//
Theres low blows and backstabbing, theres no other way//
Ya gotta struggle to the top, to the place where it plays//

[hook]

Baby momma gotta love her... but she won't stop yelling//
Will there be police involved? Theres no fucking telling//
Ya try to reasonable, ya ask her nicely//
After all, ya don't wanna kill ya wifey//
But no, she aint having it, she just keeps bitching//
The rent, the baby, the car SHE WONT FUCKING LISTEN//
Ya getting so pissed, the anger burns inside//
Your Adrenaline kicking into hyper drive//
But mind says 'kill her'' but ya heart says 'no'//
Remember she put up with ya nagging yo//
'Aw who cares, she fucking deserves it'//
Does she really? Or are YOU the one who started shit?//
So ya back down let her screams wake the dead//
Its an uphill battle ya'll but ya gotta use ya head//

[hook]

Sitting at ya desk... thinking about tonight//
The big rap battle... the shits gonna be tight//
But you got homework about as high as you//
Ya sit and think... What the fuck do you do?//
Ya already flunking, but ya almost at a D//
If ya get up to a C you can get in the University//
But the battle... How can u miss it?//
But ya got ya life ahead of ya... ya can't just say piss it//
Let it go and watch ya lif slip between ya fingers//
End up desperate for money, being the man that pulls the trigger//
Unload three and a super market guy//
Run out the door and theres fourty cops outside//
10 year minimum for armed robbery//
All because u up and said "Fuck the D"//
To go and battle, something that wouldn't even win?//
Fuck this dude, pick back up ya pen//

[hook x5]

uppin for feedback on my TOPICAL verse

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yo do i have to uppin it already?

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this drop was better than tha other one , , , ,but it still lacked wordplay ,

uppin

i didnt find it that good...its aight like my man Bash said its lacked word play complexity and all that good shit...keep elevating though...wahid