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No Crew/No D.Ryding/No Hate/No Recycling..that means no feeding
1hour time limit after check in
explained and poll votes will decide it

You ready?

its 7:55 how bout' till 9

coo

start now

Ok....time to prove I can hang in Elite....shall we begin



I get on your nerves like surgical-folds,Is 1 nice?..., I heard-a-few-NO's::
I'm certain-you-know, peeps wouldnt fall into your punchlines, if you wrote them with a VERTICAL HOLE::

You Better-show-respect, or get Severed-below-the-neck::
your like Retards Masterbating during quizes, 1 you "never-come(cum)-correct"::
Named 1-n-gone, cause after your 1st one, we ask "R U-Done-REJECT"::
you just cant spit hot, even if your "CAPS", were really from a tek::

you couldnt "break it down", even if your ass wrote in great-intervals::
Your not a Leader/Or a Soldier...look at his sig...your in a crew with "Eight Generals"::

WTF is that about?

when my punches land,Certainly-his-head-Rocks::
this dude wouldnt have nice lines, that flow off the top of his head, even if he had MurphyLee-Dred-Locks::
his rap "sheets" wouldnt be "Sick", if he caught the worst disease from his Bed Top::
dude wont "Bust" into the HipHop industry, if he was investigating 50cents, with the rest of the Fed Cops::

This chapter is done, Bastard I won, you garbage like the living quarters of Sanford & Son::
you'll never "spit anything sick", even if you cuaght "Cancer in lungs"::

1-N-Gone is staggering...time for the KO punch

You wont stick out, your hoping I push you UP, like training Bras, to little tittie hoes::
your a little slow....and more ASS than J.Lo's New Video::

Spandex Wearing MuFucka....lol.....


Rise

Yo dawg rise ama vote on thiz battle as soon tha dude drop his verse but vote on my battle vs Fatal is tie 5-5 holla

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too tha point..........


yo rise play close attention ur flo is fallin down similiar too niagra/
u gettin up to challenge me is as potent like hugh heff wit no viagra//

my verbal dagger stops u dead in ya tracks like frozen tag/
think rise is 'sick'? ya if u 'sea fag' in tha dictionary next too 'scurvy scalliwag'//

(quick switch)
its ova yo 'gone' jus stopped ur ascension/ pulled u from recess into detention/ for lack of comprehention/ as i did mention a simple intervention/ rise lives up too his name like inner city drug prevention//

(back)

instead droppin for good, u steady exel for worse like D strawberry in rehab/
must be a family curse, or is it ur poppa's seed was really sad//

compared to my broadway like award winning rap PRODUCTIONS/
norton antivirus couldnt erase ur RB n hip hop corruptions//

so rise jus keep on suckin/ get 'smashed' like semi trucks 'n'/
dame dash in r.o.c. videos 'drunken'/u winnin this battle makes as much sense as web-hand midget bitches finger fuckin//

wats ur record?

WTF happened to my Record?.....why is it 0-0?

1-N-gones also

WTF WATS MY RECORD??

oh thanku jesus....wooo chest poundin

OK its back...scurred me for a minute

**lol**

Now can we get some votes

Rise took this one, wth first of all more creative punches and a flury of them also.

the verticle hole line was some tight shit.
And rise's overal flow and set up of punches was better.

1's spit was aiight, punches were o.k. but wasn't up to the skill leve of his opponent.


Vote= rise

Ya'll click on the link and vote on my battle with Lyricbrutilizer


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44438

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Bang On The Table Productions

holy shit...that was sick...........
yet this was still close....

but Rise took this with harder punches, and better wordplay

vote=rise

My vote is goin to Rise. I read both and felt more punch from rise than 1nGone. But both were ill.

Vote => Rise <=

help out and vote here pleaz. id poll vote but i need 100 posts. Pleaze poll vote here as well.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1