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Old 05-06-03, 02:20 PM   #1
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Mystik11 VS D Verbal

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30 Lines Max....10 Min...

Check In By:Wednesday
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Voting Ends:Sunday

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Old 05-06-03, 03:51 PM   #2
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im in yo!!!!!
 
Old 05-06-03, 10:04 PM   #3
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im in
 
Old 05-07-03, 11:08 PM   #4
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im jus droppin now....

D Verbal stop battlin', nobody likes u, not even the lord/
So when u came out ya mama they cut ya dick off instead of ur umbilical chord/
U couldn't punish my lyrics, with yo game bein so weak/
I'll slit ur whole family tree's neck, so no more cowards can speak/
Hasnt been able to beat anybody, not even close not once/
ur embarassed by ur rhymez, u should be called the retarded lyrical dunce/
u bitch nigga, u bendin over gettin fucked in the ass/
U just speechless in words cuz u confronted the brass/
Im gonna make ya skull shatter, face wrapped around these knuckles/
knocked all ya teeth to pieces, theres no need to laugh or chuckle/
forget all the bullshit, just get on ur kneez and start to blow me/
u shouldnt waste ur time postin, im gonna woop ya ass like u got beat by lil smokey/
Ya name says it all, standin for dicks taken by mouth/
ur face filled with nut so its hard for u to shout/
my writing is Grade A, ur literacy is grade 8/
U prolly claim to ship weight but u cant name 3 out of the fifty states/
My flow is definitely tighter than a gay mens Levi jeans/
im no fashion expert but u dont have good lyrical genes/
this nigga battlin me, hes weak, go find some more lyrics to bite/
but then again, u prolly would take ideas from ur favorite rapper, vanilla ice/
u shouldnt have joined this website, u just wastin the mods time/
talkin bout u from the big DE , ur family prolly think rhymes are a crime/
tryna battle me, u was hopin for somebody else, u so silly/
about to pee in ur pants before i roll and smoke like a philly/
so watch the votes come my way, i say, i smoked u with the herbal/
let everybody know, i just merked on D Verbal/

drop
 
Old 05-07-03, 11:10 PM   #5
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i mean roll and smoke u like a philly
 
Old 05-08-03, 08:38 PM   #6
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aiyo i spit check it

see when you add this shit up, it dont make no sense//1
how could i be a girl if i got more dick than this cat, have him all tense//2
i guess my feminine side does show when my lines is un swallowed//3
cuz you poppin a strong one at the sight of my rhymes, damn you aint got no//4
intelligence in ya flows like you dropped out of pre school//5
i guess he aint listen to his guidance counselor when he said be cool//6
you see fool ya shit needs some direction//7
instead of focusin on rippin me, you rippin on my complexion//8
when my deflections spit twice as dejected as you and im whiter than casper//9
you just an actor, you prolly some white cat at home tryin to be blacker//10
you and rhymin dont work out they just dont factor//11
you all ready to rumble when ya wrote ya verse but you shitin ya self after//12

fuck im shootin blanks thats all i got dog...sorry if it aint much

holla!!!!!
 
Old 05-08-03, 09:55 PM   #7
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This Battle Sucked.. Foreal..

BreakDown...........

Mystik11:

D Verbal stop battlin', nobody likes u, not even the lord/
So when u came out ya mama they cut ya dick off instead of ur umbilical chord/

^Ehh.. 2.5

U couldn't punish my lyrics, with yo game bein so weak/
I'll slit ur whole family tree's neck, so no more cowards can speak/

^^....Umm, lol. 2.5

Hasnt been able to beat anybody, not even close not once/
ur embarassed by ur rhymez, u should be called the retarded lyrical dunce/

^^Nice.. 6.0

u bitch nigga, u bendin over gettin fucked in the ass/
U just speechless in words cuz u confronted the brass/

^^Blahhhhhh.. 1.5

Im gonna make ya skull shatter, face wrapped around these knuckles/
knocked all ya teeth to pieces, theres no need to laugh or chuckle/

^Wasn't felling.. 3.0

forget all the bullshit, just get on ur kneez and start to blow me/
u shouldnt waste ur time postin, im gonna woop ya ass like u got beat by lil smokey/

^^ .. 4.5

Ya name says it all, standin for dicks taken by mouth/
ur face filled with nut so its hard for u to shout/

Lmao... Funny but wack.. 4.0

my writing is Grade A, ur literacy is grade 8/
U prolly claim to ship weight but u cant name 3 out of the fifty states/

.... 3.5

My flow is definitely tighter than a gay mens Levi jeans/
im no fashion expert but u dont have good lyrical genes/

... You could of made that waay better. 2.5

this nigga battlin me, hes weak, go find some more lyrics to bite/
but then again, u prolly would take ideas from ur favorite rapper, vanilla ice/

lool.. decent.. 5.0

u shouldnt have joined this website, u just wastin the mods time/
talkin bout u from the big DE , ur family prolly think rhymes are a crime/

*Shakes Head* 3.5

tryna battle me, u was hopin for somebody else, u so silly/
about to pee in ur pants before i roll and smoke like a philly/

DA Fuck........ 0.0

so watch the votes come my way, i say, i smoked u with the herbal/
let everybody know, i just merked on D Verbal/

5.0

Overall:: 41.

D Verbal:

see when you add this shit up, it dont make no sense//1
how could i be a girl if i got more dick than this cat, have him all tense//2

^^WTF... who said u where a girl.. 2.0

i guess my feminine side does show when my lines is un swallowed//3
cuz you poppin a strong one at the sight of my rhymes, damn you aint got no//4

Whattttt....???? 1.5

intelligence in ya flows like you dropped out of pre school//5
i guess he aint listen to his guidance counselor when he said be cool//6

1.0

you see fool ya shit needs some direction//7
instead of focusin on rippin me, you rippin on my complexion//8

5.0

when my deflections spit twice as dejected as you and im whiter than casper//9
you just an actor, you prolly some white cat at home tryin to be blacker//10

3.5

you and rhymin dont work out they just dont factor//11
you all ready to rumble when ya wrote ya verse but you shitin ya self after//12

3.5

Overall:: 16.5

This Was A Real Waste Of My Time.... Vote=Mystik11
 
Old 05-08-03, 10:57 PM   #8
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yo jackass if you gon read the verses read the motherfuckin verses dog...misticks first 2 lines say...
D Verbal stop battlin', nobody likes u, not even the lord/
So when u came out ya mama they cut ya dick off instead of ur umbilical chord/
if i was someone voting on the poll i would say, wow it looks like mystiks call d verbal a girl...fuckin retard...dont be gay...if you dont understand the words than dont fuckin post jackass..

ps...this battle was pretty weak, my verse was horrible and i admit it!!!!!!
 
Old 05-08-03, 10:59 PM   #9
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plus ya whole fuckin scorin shit is unfair cuz

hes got 23 22 lines something like that and i got 12...so even if we both got one point for every bar than hed still end up wit twice as many as me retard
 
Old 05-08-03, 11:13 PM   #10
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Hey Hey.. Chill, He Never Called You A Girl..lol, You Just Said You Have No Junx.. That Don't Mean Your A Girl.. But You Can Think You Are One.. I Don't Give A Fuck.. BE A GIRL.. An Yo.. My Vote Is How You Need To Vote.. You Should Of Posting More Lines.. Maybe You Would Of Caught Up With His Wackness.. And Yo.. If You Posted a Dope Verse With 6 Lines You Could Of Beat Him..

Beat Ya Shit Was Trash... So STFU!!
 
Old 05-09-03, 10:57 AM   #11
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I agree with Jack....this battle was really wack! I saw nuttin here that I saw as "at least" good.....seriously. I'm gonna have to give it to Mystik because he had at least a punch. Yo D...listen to Jack....if you dropped 6 or so dope lines...it woulda killed his 24....easily...

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Old 05-09-03, 01:43 PM   #12
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ill show us some punchez trip marxx. ill murder u. set it up in front linez bitch
 
Old 05-09-03, 04:15 PM   #13
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i admit the shit...my verse wasnt hot..i do better than that shit all the time...i just wasnt all there...i couldnt think straight when i wrote it ... its cool tho i can take a loss man!!!
 
Old 05-12-03, 03:44 PM   #14
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2-0Mystic11 wins

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