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Old 05-03-03, 08:09 PM   #1
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just a free style let me know what ya'll think

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yo my heart is filled wit malice/if you took it out you'd say it was one big callous/
feelins of hate and pain just keep passin thru/keep fuckin wit i'll cut short you and ya crew
sittin spittin nothin but da realand da fosho/i'll wisper sweet nothins wit silenced 44
stoppin all niggas who claim to be hard in they tracks/you know how that gat put em flat on dey back
dey musta been smokin when they fuck wit dis man/specially when dey know i grab my heater any time i can
have you disapearin quiker den vanilla ice/i done killed befo not once but twice
neva would speak about it in it neva happened/ask the victim they don't even no what happened
i just lost my self in da mix/boy u is useless like some scuffed up kicks
boy my nine a sing a lullabie and put u to sleep/i'ma play tlc so i'll creep
den i'll hit you wit da bullets do a blackstreet and go deep/interruptin yo life wit one to ya spine
boy i should be a garbage man how i stay stuck in da grime/
doin niggas dirty like diapers/den play riddlin and calm em when dey get hyper
calm yo nerves and splatta ya shit/boy i ain't no crack head rhymin is my glass dick
i'll make like ali and sting like bee/have yo soul lifted like you was smokin a tree
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Old 05-04-03, 01:08 AM   #2
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this drop was aight , , ,but it could have been better
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Old 05-04-03, 02:32 AM   #3
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not so good, could have been betta if u really tried
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Old 05-06-03, 05:03 PM   #4
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ya'll right
can't get mad at ya'll criticism
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