Okay yall lets do this shit .

Younggadget
I'm in the world's business/
My business is the world/
Doing 20 things at once,plus I'm talking to your girl/
My flow make you url,like you at an amusement park/
Becareful in the dark,cause in the dark that's where I spark/
I got 7 girls of every race like I'm on Noah's Ark/
You can't drown a shark, i rather hark and spit on your grave/
For being brave ,I send shot till them bitches gaze/
Put you in a daze,put you in a grave/
You dudes is 7 days,in other words week(weak)/
Every day of the week,I creep down streets/
Looking for cats that talk shit behind my back/
So I can squeeze the trigga on my gaut/
So you best to believe it my nigga I aint these other cats/
I got bigger nut sacks,and gauts to blow the wall back/
And your chest back so nigga can you test that/
Nope,I don't think you can,to all you clowns,the funny shit is coming to an end..why?/

chorus
Cause it's all about Ghetto Animosity and my city/
We don't get enough trouble nigga ain't that a pity/
We get giddy when we bout to scrap/
Niggas talk shit,nigga get the fuck back/
Before I break you off these bullets like they kit kats/
Nigga get back,get back,nigga please get back/
Before you get your wig tapped,pimp slapped/
So get back,get back,nigga,get back,get back/

Bloodbank

I blind you fucking niggas with the ice on my wrist/
And if there's a party at a house we only poppin the cris/
Don't bring your girl to the club cause we taking that bitch/
You want to talk shit,you can see my semi in act/
I put the guns in your chest push it out of your back/
We turning skinny niggas fat from the lead of our gaut/
We don't mean to make you bitches cry/
We just want to know if you motha fuckas want to ride or die/
If not I'm quick to put 3 in a guy/
Bullet hole in your forehead,you got a 3rd eye/
If you got dance moves break 'em out/
If not I put these guns in your chest and just try to Harlem shake 'em out/
Show bitch niggas what G.A. all about,what,what,what!!/

chorus
Cause it's all about Ghetto Animosity and my city/
We don't get enough trouble nigga ain't that a pity/
We get giddy when we bout to scrap/
Niggas talk shit,nigga get the fuck back/
Before I break you off these bullets like they kit kats/
Nigga get back,get back,nigga please get back/
Before you get your wig tapped,pimp slapped/
So get back,get back,nigga,get back,get back/

Younggadget
Ain't no time to negoiate/
I'm trying to finish my plate and take what ever you got on yours/
My flows like candy,butterscotch,snickers and smores/
In other words little kids,they be craving for more/
And bullets like kit kats,I'll break you off a piece/
I should be isolated by myself,living in peace/
Instead of writing raps and being a lyrical beast/
I'm living for ever the opposite of being deceased/
I'll leave your brains out of reach capease.you understand me/


chorus
Cause it's all about Ghetto Animosity and my city/
We don't get enough trouble nigga ain't that a pity/
We get giddy when we bout to scrap/
Niggas talk shit,nigga get the fuck back/
Before I break you off these bullets like they kit kats/
Nigga get back,get back,nigga please get back/
Before you get your wig tapped,pimp slapped/
So get back,get back,nigga,get back,get back/
**repeat 3 times then fade out**

That was my nigga Bloodbank.He aint on Rb.yet but he's coming soon.Lets get some feed back on this

honestly, i think this was wack, you werent really rapping about anything, its like a teret syndrom, its to random. try rapping about a topic....

and please dont bring your friend over here, all that bling bling shit is wack specialy when he doesnt have it.

flu just summed this all up, this whole thing was whack

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keep elevatin......haha

I blind you fucking niggas with the ice on my wrist/
And if there's a party at a house we only poppin the cris/

^^^Hahahahaha , This nigga is rapping about his Bling Bling and about a party , Please Dont bring none of ur commercial shit here , This collab was Straight up WHACK

POOP

Lol

Thanks for the comments but what is consider commericial.Aint like this nigga famous.What the fuck is this:
Eliminated I'm a have you Feelin Lifeless Like you're Dehydrated"/
Rhymez are being Stated , So U better be careful because my Skillz are Enchance , Unfortunately I'm going Into Spills at Glance"/
Oh but you think some shit like this is the best in the world.Yall is starting to create rap into something different than what it is.You can't just always go around talking shit.Okay you can sprinkle some metaphores,punchlines,nd all of that other shit,but eventually that shit is going to get corny.You is allowed to make some hype shit every now and then.Make some shit for the niggas on the block.What would a nigga look like driving down the block bumping some;Electromagnets attract electric storms to fry you like elements from the periodic table,Exterminators do biological tests on on you morphing human beings.I mean what the fuck?I bet you this.If I had put out a single of this song and yall would have put out a single feeled with all the corny shit,my single will sell.Drop some shit that niggas can relate to and free your mind from all this trying to be the greatest lyricist shit.It's times like this I wish biggie or Tupac was alive.They can drop the commericial,the shit the people willm want to hear on the radio.But on their cd they can have what ever they want.That's exactly how it is.Drop what you want.Keep the real hard metaphores,punchlines and shit on your album.word

try rappin aboout a topic this shit was wack elivate..............

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damn................I thought this Woulda been betta c'mon yall... I kinda realized that you didnt have a TOPIC... Ghetto Animosity is WAY BETTA DEN DAT....
LaTeR

lol dog this piece was fuckin wack

subject matter- awful
vocabulary- awful
Wordplay- fuckin crap
Rhymes- sheeeeeeeeeit

elevate dudes

eborted verdict- G

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Grade=F- , , Whackest Piece ever , Please dont tell ur Whack friend to Resgister here , Cause His Ice will Blind me

His ice wil blind me
Bash that was fucking FUnny as Shit
I laughed for 2 minutes after i read that one

Whoa I'm getting judge by someone that has been banned from biting.and has no wins just losses.(GrYm StYlE )
I'm also getting judged by the person who stole my fucking lyrics.(Bash)Whatever to thesong we was going to do for a collabo?Oh they popped up in one of your songs........haters


Anyway,I f this was done in audio it would be good........Or put it like this.If 50 cent would have said this yall would have liked.


And no I'm not mad at the comments.What I am mad at though is the same mothafuckas keep coming back saying it's wack.

Wat Da Fuck , Did u Just say that I stold ur Lyrics?