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Old 05-09-03, 09:04 PM   #1
Keys aka Vital
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Assist the weak in their self-centered acts,make em see it ain't just-about-rap,bus'-a-loud-cap,priveleged cuz i'm strapped,my arsenal's my lyrics,admire that,desire facts?,i'm feedin you knowledge,which shall attract,good or malice,a proven stylus, i'm full with thoughts from my inner-child's shit,then comes the verbs,metaphors,and adjectives,i'm a mother now,speech on paper,rap's my kid,like it or not, i can't deny it,pecieve a diffrent child,unheard of,see by it?,how outlandish,untaught, and untamed, like the ancient spanish, lost and blamed,i been tossed in flame,lost my game, retrieved it mayne,got better flows,just lettin you know, i ride hard on tracks like a train, trackin your game, break backs like Backlund mayne....


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Old 05-09-03, 09:32 PM   #2
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dude i cant even read this buz u fucked up wih typing it

if your ever//
gonna type//
make shure that//
you put it///
in bars///
like this

instead of the which is hard to read when u r rtying to feel a flow

feel me?
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Old 05-09-03, 10:10 PM   #3
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this drop was confusin
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Old 05-09-03, 10:18 PM   #4
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it's just sayin i got dis rap shit locked
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Old 05-09-03, 10:37 PM   #5
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you stealin a emcee's name..Keys
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Old 05-09-03, 11:32 PM   #6
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Orakilla has landed and is accepting all challenges!!
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Old 05-10-03, 01:44 PM   #7
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i had this name for 3 years and i payed $250 to have it copyrighted....who's it belong to?
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