wrote this last night

Thinkin of a master plan
Cuz ain't nuthin but sweat inside my hand
So I dig into my pocket, all my money is spent
So I dig deeper but still comin up with lint
So I start my mission- leave my residence
Thinkin how could I get some dead presidents
I need money, I used to be a stick-up kid
So I think of all the devious things I did
I used to roll up, this is a hold up, ain't nuthin funny
Stop smiling, be still, don't nuthin move but the money
But now I learned to earn cos I'm righteous
I feel great! so maybe I might just
Search for a 9 to 5, if I strive
Then maybe I'll stay alive
So I walk up the street whistlin this
Feelin out of place cos, man, do I miss
A pen and a paper, a stereo, a tape of
Me and Eric B, and a nice big plate of
Fish, which is my favorite dish
But without no money it's still a wish
Cos I don't like to dream about gettin paid
So I dig into the books of the rhymes that I made
To now test to see if I got pull
Hit the studio, cos I'm paid in full

Doing it to this audio me man EB hooked me up wid 2nite at da studio

feedback much appreciated

this is a classic up

Lackin vocab , wordplay , and multies ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, u gotta elevate dawg

THATS CLASSIC SHIT.I THINK THAT WAS RAKIM?WAS YOU TRYING TO PASS THAT RAP FOR YOUR OWN.IF YOU WAS YOU A DICKRIDER IF YOU WASNT THANKS FOR BRINGIN BACK MEMORIES.

hahahahahhahaha , , , yeah it was Rakim ,, , hahahahahahahahahah , , , , , this nigga is biting

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lmao your da 1 who sed Rakim needced 2 elevate fuck u!

this verse was voted the 3rd greatest verse of all time by the readers and writers of Hip Hop Connection one of the most repsected mags in hip hop land. yes its betta than uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

the fuck you biting other mcs verbals...you wack dunny...i think you should get banned for doing some stupid shit like that...so get the fuck outta here like bankrupt porno sets...wahid

man, u still try'n to pass it off as your own.. plus It wasn't that complex of a rhyme.. it had good flow that's about it... there was no good word-play, or vocab.. it's an old-school jam, good for it's time, but compared to modern lyrics it lacks almost every aspect of a bomb track.. BITERS ARE DICKRYDAS

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fuck u
The MRB is Rakim u knob get me, i had 2 go undercover but time to let the real me out.
yes a famous rapper is on the boards

RAKIM IN MUSLEM NOT CHRISTIAN.HE DONT BELIEVE IN JESUS HE BELIEVE IN ALLAH. SO GET OFF OF RAKIM'S DICK AND GET THE FUCK ON