aight whats up
da rules
10-16 lines
no crew.dr,or hate votes
u spit first

well im bout to leave in a little while so u can spit whenever u want and when im back ill spit cause i got a battle wit the cobra right now than im out so dont think im not going to show....aight one holla back

uietly reminiscin, askin bout ya past, laugh hysterically wit tears/
Mirrors reflection giggling, only getting felt afta a couple beers/
Passin queers inspection, hand up volunteering when opportunity raised/
Joggin dazed motions, grazed flesh, wackness seize to amaze/
Lazy statement, always givin compliments, makin my crown fit/
Sick images of Westside, broke ya leg to establish tha Crips/
Flip ages, sacred to flowin, punches hittin makin ya smile-fall/
DNA scattered wit lead, close functions while you pourin Tylenol/
High levels reaching, combustion fill the air wit ya in digust/
Must trample ya pride, pumped energy, ya lips full of lust/
Bus ridin, 16 year old dealin problems, crazed but simples loud/
Dimples while giggling, fuck Clearasil, I’ll shoot ya pimples out/
Comin at me with a lyrical light sabor/
I fuckin take it and break in 2/
Your raps are truly fuckin wack..sorta like you/
Bitch I just brutally damaged your ego, peace out nigga asta le ago/

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fuck you and your big words,this aint seasme street so stop tryin to be BIG BIRD/
and stop tryin to act like a college professor/
cause everybody knows u gonna be a hair dresser/
i hold heat like a radiator,fight for mine like a roman gladiator/
dont be mad cause u a hater and a faggot/
thinkin u could rap cause u made it a habit/
u got a gun grab it or get fucked faster than a rabbit/
bitch please,hear are my balls, u could lick on these/
ive delt with more beef than Mickie D's/
over 99 billion served,i dont need to shoot u,i could just kill u wit words/
my spit game is ridiculous,im so sick wit it niggas call me syphilis/
im like a walking infection the army could nt even give ur punk ass enuff protection/
im so offical on the mic i should be holdin a whistle wearin black and white stripes/
my sixteens could fit in the clip of a gun/
so if u slip than its done/
i shine so bright im solar eclipse and the sun/

come on peepz vote......................uppin uppin uppin........aight one holla back..........uppin uppin uppin

there were no personals from either of yall here......both seemed prewritten.......but Mic there is just sumthin bout youre style that throws me off......some of it didnt make sense......so

vote=My

aight thanx ......................uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin.........................aight one holla back

Mysterious just barely took this.
Barely.
Hogun's shit is tight and makes you think...
But sometimes while you're sittin there thinkin about shit...
Ya get knocked the fuck out by the next one.
And that's what happened here.
Real good and thought provoking...
I almost gave it to ya...
But this line couldn't be beat...
"im so offical on the mic i should be holdin a whistle wearin black and white stripes"

That was dope...

Mysterious

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yeh both were lackin personal's and hard hittin punches aswell. i agree wit wot irrelevance sed, there was sumthin about Mic's verse, it weren't connected if u got me. each line didnt correspond wit the pther.

Vote = Mysterious

mysterious just took this 4 beta flow but ya can both do beta, but keep it up! peace!

vote= mysterious

remember vote on mine with vortex y'all poll votes 2!

aight thanx everyone but somebody did nt poll and thats what i need so if u can poll than thanx and ill hit up yours aight one..........uppin uppin

come on peepz uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin...................uppin uppin

I GOTTA GO WIT MIC ON DIS
HE CAME WIT CREATIVITY N COMPLEXITY BUT MYSTERIOUS WAS GOOD...IF HE WOULDA CAME A LIL HARDER HE WOULDA HAD DIS