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dealin wit pressure/
the world is cold and unmeasured/ im takin lessons should help me make me wiser/ tryin to battle have to comtemplate like im mcguiver/ twisted up wires niggaz always hate on atire/ i think i might swell get mad an go on a spell/ i cant tell where im going but most think im chillin in hell/ yall mad at me cause im flossin better than dentist can tell/ they should call me dennis cause my words causin a menace/ detrimental to society the whole world lookin at me/ my words luminated like ya license like goverment cheese/ my mission to please have fallen death upon these ears/ yall cant hear me than why fuck yall here/ to diss and misstreat me is bad for most/ cause nine out of ten recommend u come to the host/ im transparent u can see only rhymes like a kungfu fighter/ told yall im transparent most call me the ghostwriter/ if i could have my way shit would fall right in my lap/ i'd be fat wit riches on my back and not labeled wack/ if u would try to pressure me i would bounce back like mike/ but if im the same old me then..... |
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ahhaha macgyver...ahha that cat is crazy...he built a detonator outta a toothpaste tube,clippers,a ribbon,and a battery...how he got all the eletricals to do it with those materials ill never know,i tried that shit allthe time,never worked....anyway back tothe rhyme,i though tit was a decnt rhyme mdb i didnt understand the line iwht the kungfu fighter nahmean...and bein called aghostwriter aint always a good thing nahmean,haha nah im jus playin with you dun...i liked this,a couple of lines seemed out becasue they were shorter then theones before,but its not hard to fix that shit nahmean...i thgouth maybe you lost your topic from the starting nahmean,you was talkin bout being pressured and shit,then calln yourslef the transperant andshit,sounding like a bit of a just straight spittin whats on your mind nahmean..nothign wrong with that...no doubt,was an aiigh tpeice...keep posting...
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thanks dawg
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