20 line max.. 10 line min
normal voting rules
all poll votes must be explained..
first to 5 wins
3-0 ko.. 5-0 toe tagged (<-- u dead son )

since the last thread got closed because "I didn't do it right".. here's a brand new thread same rules and I did it right this time...

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Beat= Biggie Smalls "Dead Wrong"

you couldn't have a good chord if you were a fender.// <---fender guitars
you better learn to put weight on the bars, 'cause dawg I'm-a bench presser.//
lift you over my head and drop you, still compared to the sound you make the beat sounds better.//
ya words like aged chedder, if it don't get worse, it only gets better,//
but at the moment you not even a contender.//
I bend-yer neck back 'till it snaps and still ya heads not as crooked as mine, ever...//
I'm like lined ledger, I define the borders in ya sentence.//
a menace.. evil and mal-nourished, hungry, but your lyrics so empty I couldn't feed of your verses.//
how you expect to grow if your seeds not even planted, get down to earth kid.//
I'm firmly rooted like an evergreen, natural beauty un-like your synthetic schemes.//
sympathetic pleas, warlord's down on his knees.//
his-majesty's crown's being handed to me, as I spread my merkings like a rampid disease.//
yo, I'm a tarus so I trample your keys, they not up to code so they sweat shop-factory steez.//
the only thing you good for is waxing my jeep....

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its the Mike Jordan of mic recordin....battlin the worthless/
your skillz is like "Steve Nash" on the block...you "Post"with no threat/
i suggest rethink ya lines before you battle next time/
if Lewis taught you a "Straight jab"... you still woundln't have a decent "Punch-Line"/
after this get "White chalk" for ya body cause it'll be "Formfittin"/
or develop a "stutter" in ya fist and beat own ya self into sumbmission/
rippin from ya "adams apple", "peelin" shots to the back of ya neck/
you'd think i was "AT&t" when i "Connect rounds" down the "enter of ya chest/
my words penitrate minds likes tek 9's.. but like helium they elevate/
plus educate ya brain, then leave a "hole" in ya head to let ya thoughts escape/
bring ya whole illiterate click and Vader will easily defeat'em/
even with "Jay-Z's Blueprint" yaw still couldn't follow my paradigm/
my style getz Malice when im not up against a challenge/
ill ducktape ya nutz to a jet and have it crash twords Bin landen's palace/
ya whole verse made me laugh like you was purposely being comical/
i laughed so hard i past gas, and had more talent in my shit particles/
if i was "jenga" and you pulled out ya "peice"...you still wouldn't topple this/
your ryhmes make no sents like a giraffe fuckin a hippopatamas/
this mc genes is diluted induced with retardedly fluids/
his wordplay makes him look like a heldback student whos stupid/

yo, I'm uppin' this and for some reason it needs to be 100 characters long so I have to type all this fucking bullshit just to up my thread and get some damn votes........ fuck.. maybe this is long enough.....

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what the fuck?!! mines too. aight hold up i'll try this.............................................. .........uppin fa votes.

heheh i found this line entertainin. small things entertain small minds.

ya whole verse made me laugh like you was purposely being comical/
i laughed so hard i past gas, and had more talent in my shit particles/

both had relatively good wordplay but i vouch for warlord.

VOTE => warlord <=

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44953

.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....let's see if that's 100.. lol, uppin' come on sleepers

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thanx fa the vote playa .................................................. .............
.................................................. ...........................uppin for votes

come on now yaw.... we need yaw to vote before they close this battle...........................uppin for votes

VOOOTTTEEESSS..... fuckin assenine sleepers, ubsurd bastards... .................................................. ...........

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::::::::::::::::::::::::::my opinion is warlord was better with his punches, even though i cant poll the vote i just thought it would be good to let you know:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

warlords got my vote. it was jus simply better and had better word play. his shit made me laugh 2. so im gonna hve to give it to him

fuck this shit.. I'm done text battles after the 2 on 2 against hit parade... gonna stick with audio... damn... niggas need to hear it to know warlord just got merked..

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appreciate the vote son........................... make sure you poll it though............................................ ................................uppin