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06-18-03, 06:51 AM
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shit is just too easy.
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B.R.E Presents: ..Alone..
IP: EB26 FBFF
..Alone..
Lost..In A Room Full Of Strangers.. Hells Angel's Makin Promises To Keep Me Away From Danger.. Pullin Me Slowly Away From The People I Trust And Love.. Takin Me Downward To Hell Instead Of To Heaven Above.. Fightin Back As Hard As I Can Trying To Break His Grip.. I Finally Got Away But In The Attempt A Part Of My Wing Ripped.. Running Towards To Stairway To Heaven So I Can Get Back Home.. The Door Closed And I Was Left All Alone.. In A WasteLand Of Souls And Carcasses Right In The Middle Of Heaven And Hell.. No Ones Here,Its Was Like Solitary Confinement Without The Cell.. This Whole Thing Started By Me Wandering Out Of The Pearly Gates Of Heaven.. Once A Kid Now An Angel,Killed By A Drunk Driver At The Age Of Eleven.. Can't Get Home And I'm Lost In A World In Between.. A Weird Feeling Where The Demon Scratched My Skin,Skin's Turning Colors And It Stings.. I've Undergone A Transformation But Theres Nothing Here To See My Reflection.. This Scratch Has Drained My Powers Only Thing I Have Left Is Spirit Detection.. Scene Changes And I End Up In The Fiery Caves Of Hell,With The Smell Of Fire And Brimstone.. I'm An Angel,I'm In Hell,I Know No One Here,I'm Lost,I'm All Alone.. Last edited by Mr. Rogers : 06-20-03 at 06:40 AM. |
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06-18-03, 04:50 PM
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IP: 508E 446C
Trauma that was real dope man .... i could envision ur words as if it were a movie...i felt you on this one
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06-18-03, 07:57 PM
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shit is just too easy.
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IP: EB26 FBFF
Thx Man..Uppin Fa More Replies
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06-18-03, 10:08 PM
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IP: 508E 446C
Quote:
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06-19-03, 12:17 AM
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shit is just too easy.
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IP: EB26 FBFF
Uppin...
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06-19-03, 04:25 AM
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IP: 36D3 8E25
Kinda crazy right here. Dat's what u get from straying from Heaven aka the place u're supposed to be. I wonder if someone who left Hell and went to Heaven would feel the same way? *shrugs* good piece right here. Thanks for peepin' mines. Holla back.
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06-19-03, 08:35 AM
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-Merk Squad-
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Liked that had some good imagery
Wordplay was good wAs good ish Post more............ |
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06-19-03, 05:32 PM
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Sharp Perfection.
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im pretty new at this but i know when i like something and something sounds good to me. and that was something that caught my eye!
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06-20-03, 03:55 AM
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shit is just too easy.
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IP: EB26 FBFF
THx Fa All Tha Luv..Keep More Feedback Comin
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06-20-03, 08:30 AM
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Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
Nice poem.....i liked it
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Fuck you |
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