10/15 lines
no c/v, d/r etc...

i'll spit first

You are retarded lyrically, you are impeded libretto//
My spits weigh MC’s down heavier than a kilo, of lead//
None gives a fuck, about what you just said, it’s shit talking//
You vocal cords will soon begin locking, you made you bed//
I’m gonna intrigue you lyrics suspiciously, worse than a fed, you know//
No-one out here wants to see you, fucked-up appalling no-show//
I find more enjoyment in wiping the repulsive grubby hair, off my little toe//
You’ve just been fucked by illegal and co., come on kid, bring it on//
Unlike you, my rhymes go tighter than Lil’ kim’s thrifty thong//
But you, all you do is wrong, you think you are finer, more superior than,//
King kong, but by the end of this song, your shit will drop, worse than,//
The towers, but my exquisite lyrical powers, I enter this game like,//
A go-getter, don’t think you better, pussy, your brain produces shit loosly//
I extremely fussily about the shit I put out, but now all I gotta do is shout//
I WON THIS SHIT, IT WAS A K-O, I’ WON THIS FUCKIN BOUT!//

yo ain't win shit, you just won an ass whippin,
i'm lyrically retarded? nigga you must be trippin,
you just like slingblade, fuckin up all ya jokes,
yous a pussy mufucka and you bout to get poked,
wussup wit you dog, is yo thong too tight?
you stepped to the wrong person, i don't think your too bright,
Fall like the world trade? nigga i'm still standin,
i'll take you down to hell and leave yo ass stranded,
you thought you was the hottest around, until i came,
but i'm not the one to blame cuz nigga you just lame,
even if you came up strong, i killed ya cuz you weak,
you thought that was good, this was just a sneek peak,
i knocked you in a loop, just fuckin around,
yous a lame ass bitch, knocked out in the 1st round

come on peeps, uppin for votes and explinations,..

remember no crew votes, dick-ridin or haters!.

im goin to have to go with rythmic on this one.his verse had better punches and a much tighter flow.plus he had no fillers or weak lines.but his opening and ending werent much to talk about.

vote-Rythmis Tendicies

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0431#post430431

uNo

yeh i agree wit alpha but it werent a very impressive battle. u both can do better. Rythmic had a good flow and sum aight punches. BX had sum aight punches just need 2 work on ur style a bit.

Vote = RythmicTendicies

True...this battle could have been better...but Bomba made it an easy win due to the fact of a simple verse structure...R.T. had the better punches in the end...

Vote: RythmicTendicies

Do me and favor and check my shit against Killah Kassius...its offically a wrap folks...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46897

i think bx bomba shit hotter he came more gangster the other kid shit was iight 2 but im just feelin bx bomba style maybe itz a ny thing

k, uppin for more votes peeps..

if anyone here can help me out with my battling skills, feel free to PM me, i could do with the help!

ain't dast some shit. i get 1 vote but it ain't count cuz he ain't get 100 votes in. thats cool though. c'mon niggas keep votin.

my vote goin to rhythmic. bx, you just sucked. rhythmic


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Yo Ripper...how did you get that picture in your sig. I wanted something like that in mine and like I put the link and shit in and it didn't work. Can you help me out player?

O by the way....Rythmatic got this shit. He had better vocabulary and his punches were better. Truthfully this battle was weak but in all aspects Rythmatic got this.

Vote=Rythmatic

peace

vote= bomba
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46007
return the fava and poll ma shit

thanx peeps, if you have voted with an explaination can you poll vote plz? remember you need over 100 posts to do so, thanx to the people who have alreaxdy voted!