aight u spit first like i sed
10 - 15 lines
one round only
first to 5
no crew or hate votes....

see dis the difference between noobs and real fuckin rappas/
I been fuckin bitches hotter than kappas and bustin cappas/
can't stand stupid niggaz like ya manic killa/
you need a swift improvement maybe a crew fo movement/
learn the punches of this game before challenge the untame/
this rhymes rain spittin so insane like a great dane/
chewin on ur raw ass takin no sass from ur mouth gettin no gain/
my record is missleadin i got shit that is better than what you readin/
when ya lookin at my phat shit niggaz are heatin/
the needin the life supportin to keep from trippin/
you should check these lyrics before rippin/
hey manic suck my dick after I done fuckin ya in the ass/
I know it's something that's hard fo ya to pass/
you just nuttin but trash, ass, grass or cash, you got nough money and don't smoke weed/

*tosses the mic to less spirited piece of shit...*

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Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

*takes mic from less spirited peice of shit aka whitelightnings non-existant crew*

aight

Manic Killer gonna murder the lightin //
u b sightin tru fightin when i take the mic'n//
rip you, u trip two, feet like that of a clown//
ima mess u up so bad u gonna havta leave town//
go and start a new life cos i fucked this one up good//
too bad lightnin didint eva listen like he shood//
when fuckers told him never battle the manic//
i leave yo ass screamin, rattled, ina panic//
i cut you, like them two, fellas raped, through u//
causin an instesinal stew, within u, plus a hole 2by2//
after penetrating the colon and im not talkin powell//
u a peice of rotten shit, makin this board foul//
manic the killer has 'ripped you' iller than cancer//
time to 'trip to' the family trade, transvestite pole dancer//

wooo... wack ass battle...
vote=whitelightning
reason? manic had too many fillers in his verse... it wont let me poll vote so it doesnt matter anyways... pz

I'd have to say you both need alot of work your punches are wack and your flows are pitiful the lines are uneven and the battle seemed wayy to weak if I had enough posts ta vote Id give it to wieght just coz he had some alright multi's and somewhat of a punchline thing goin on..peace..

u'd give it to weight? who tha fuk is weight? someone holla and tell me if the poll is fucked up or not.

Vote: whitelightning

cuz his punshes were better!
not good, but better! u´ve to practize a lot!

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turn ya back on me, get clapped and lose ya legs...

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turn ya back on me, get slapped and lose ya legs...
IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!"

Voice Of Tha Streetz

wack battle. manic came out stronger and flowed well. both threw punches but i say manic's hit the best. the poll aint broke, sometimes it dont let ya vote. and only people with 100+ posts can vote

VOTE---> Manic
someone poll me up at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=47710

Vote = Manic Killer

this battle was wack! no real punches worth commenting on. white ur verse had no effort. seems like u just wanted 2 put anything down that rhymed.
Manic had sum structure and what seemed like a thought out verse. well this is just my opinion, other peeps may see it differently. both ya'll need 2 elevate.

ya know i gotta give this to white - but i'll tell you this. i would love to battle either of you cuz neither one of you got skillz - it would be an easy win.

wtf, voteing for white? fukn manic raped him................... if i could vote it wood be for manic, peace

manic didn't rip me at all..i was drunk when I dropped this and I still worked him...uppin yalll fuckin end this thing and give me my win...

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Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

I'll go Manic as well...

I feel both were very low grades raps, but I think Manic hit harder when he connected (which wasn't much)...
But more the Whitelightning, I feel...

Manic

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im guna disagree wit all you haters ....

manics lines in his verses werent complext at all . he spit like 5 words a line ... and he just sucked ....

white's veerse also sucked ... but it sucked less...