This was a good piece. But the bad part about it is that a lot of people write love poems and all that. I've read some on other sites and it seems like they all say the same thing. The hard to breathe, dream about you all day kinda thing. Don't get me wrong, this one was different with some of the lines so I enjoyed reading it.

"I'm tired of be'n lied to, and deceived by looks...
Your melodic voice which leaves me shook...
Your radiant eyes, resembl'n pearls...
They tell me that I need you, girl..."

That was a part that I liked. Good imagery.

"Your the reason I live, the reason I breathe...
The reason I can't get rid of this feel'n in me...
It's like I'm lost in a dream, whenever you speak...
Dazed by your beauty, can't stand on my feet...
They say this'll end, but, I don't want it to...
Just know, I will never stop lov'n you..."

That was the other part I liked. Though you said sorta the same things I've read in other pieces, you wrote it in a different way so that's why I liked it.

You said you're trying to get back into writing? Keep posting more as you write. I'd like to see how you improve.