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Checkin In....if you want, I will spit first or you, dont matter.....just give the word.



I HATE THIS 100 CHARACTER BULLSHIT!!!!!!

ya man.. it is b-s... it don't matter whenever you're done.. within' an hour tho.................
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I finished my verse and all but I dont want my shit to be seen until you ready to post. I dont like it when cats try and pull somethin out of their ass AFTER they read my verse.....my AIM is Moneyizmoney just hit me up when you wanna post and we post at same time.

Fuck it, whatever happens happens.....


How you ever got a win in a battle is kind of Mystik/
The only time you ever get a date is when your hand is wearin lipstick/
Sitting on a stick shit is just how you travel/
You have to watch how I spit it cause you think spittin is the mucus from a camel/
If you want some wordplay then watch me play with words/
Since your birth you've been retarded because you came out feet first/
You couldnt beat me in a battle even if I gave you double my skills/
The only time you held a gun was in counter-strike, happy over double kills/
Chill cause your easy to rip the way I spill verbs/
You could re-read this verse three days from now, it will still hurt/
Your a joke, act like you pimp but cant accept late calls/
I will have you think your dying when you really got hit with paint balls/
I roll "MC's" into a very nice and fat "BlUnT"/
Ill eat you up like head lice, while you think of plans to trap cunt/
Your are now admitted to RB's Hall of whack fucks/
Beat in your own battle, now that sucks/
Your mom struggled carrying a 20 pound fetus/
My words strike hard, hard enough to smack your dad for wastin semen/
Im lyrically advanced, you are lyrically challenged/
Im superior, Even if you put us together, there would never be a lyrical balance/




Im done eating this cat up.....send the next one.....:-p

an illusionist that'll make your respect disapear infront of ya 'Optix'.//
I'm just pokin' fun and I blind you like I got this 'eye' under thumb... topic?//
how 'bout this.. you in a cypher.. Genre?.. comedy dawg, you ain't a writer.//
if these people think you are, it must be that RB's 'dumb' an' you 'Dumber'er'.//
I'll fuck you up like 'Jack her'er' buds packed in a vapourizer-yer done.//
you're a nerd with foul toung, "what, you been lickin' too much rim?"
<<optix talking>> "mmmm, it's like brown gum.".. kid just prooved my point again.
these weak cats just annoyin' and enjoyin' it.//
so I'm deploying and destroyin' them with boeing jets like osama did.//
this bitch'll never make it mainstream.. he ain't even got '40 cent'.//
dun-worry, pains-free, take these bars and beat yourself with your comeback.//
the way you run-that 'sucks' like you try'n ta get 'cum-back'.//
you still a newbie, so don't un-pack.. your wack tactics ain't wanted like 'fat-snatch'.//
you'd be better off to rap backwards back to 'RapWorlds.com'.//
atleast there they all fake; you'll get right along.//
I'll leave 'Optix' 'outta-sight' like an acid trip and 'hit's from tha bong'.//
you 'die-on-mics' like that skit on that 'kim' song.//
stab yourself with your own pen while you writing, just adding an 'injury' to this 'insult'.//

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uppin-u-fuckin sleepers suckin' tweaters like you you a '3rd base' 'reciever'............lol... we need VOTES.. come on..

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my vote is gonna have to go to blunt his flow JUST edged this one out plus he had a nice structure, hey do me a favor and hit my battle with evil_solo and dubmaster IN THE POLL since i hit this one up -1-

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My vote goes to blunt nice battle though optix held his own both had nice flow nice punches n wordplay but Blunt just edged it

Best line from Optix

If you want some wordplay then watch me play with words/
Since your birth you've been retarded because you came out feet first

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Chill cause your easy to rip the way I spill verbs/
You could re-read this verse three days from now, it will still hurt/

Best lines from Blunt

an illusionist that'll make your respect disapear infront of ya 'Optix'.//
I'm just pokin' fun and I blind you like I got this 'eye' under thumb... topic?//

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so I'm deploying and destroyin' them with boeing jets like osama did.//
this bitch'll never make it mainstream.. he ain't even got '40 cent'.//

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I'll leave 'Optix' 'outta-sight' like an acid trip and 'hit's from tha bong'.//
you 'die-on-mics' like that skit on that 'kim' song.//

well done keep it up you two

Could you hit up my battle vs. trix please