MY BRAIN WAVES COLDER THAN FREON///\
IM THE TYPE TO SHIT ON A NIGGA FOR PLAYIN A THUG IN A DODGE NEON////
FLOW'S IMMACULATE IT CAN GO FOR EON'S////
IM THE MIC MAGNIFYER OUTTA BODY DEATH DEFYER////
I GOT SUICIDE IN MY EYE'S AND HOMICIDE KINDLIN THE FIRE////
IM A MENTAL MOTHER FUCKER HEAD OF THE G.W.O EMPIRE
GRIM 75 PERCENT WACK EMCEE CANNIBAL THE OTHER IS SUBLIMINAL////
YOU LIVIN IS MINUMUL I SET UP TRAPS WHEN IM RAPPIN BILINGUAL////
MY RAPS SHOULD COME WITH AN OWNER'S MANUAL///
HELP OTHER RAPPERS FIGURE OUT HOW TO WRITE A REAL RYME////
YEAH I GOT BACK UP HIS NAME'S ULYSEEZ HE'S MY PARTNER IN CRYME////
YOU COULD CALL ME A LOWLIFE CAUSE I DONT GIVE A FUCK ABOUT ANYTHING////
I EXCELL THE BRAIN COMPACITY OF THE THREE WISE MEN WITH DEMONIC DIVIDENDS//
MY RAPS DONT END THEY ONLY BEGIN SINS THROUGH OUT THE LAND BOUNDARIE'S////
I LAUGH AND BURY THE SOULS OF ANY BODY WHO TRIE'S TO HOUND ME////
I SPIT H.I.V HOT INNOVATIVE VERBALS AND YOUR TRYING TO IMPRESS ME////
IM THE MOST VISCIOUS RYMER EVEN MIKE TYSON WOULDN'T TEST ME////
ON THE NET IM ONE OF THE BEST EMCEE'S SPITTIN FOR WEEKS WITH EASE////
I TWEAK AND ACT LIKE A FREAK IN BROAD DAYLIGHT////
STALKING MY PREY LIKE A LION GIVING OTHER EMCEE'S STAGE FRIGHT////
MY STYLE IS UNDERGROUND HORRORCORE////
I GOT A BLACK HEART AND IT'S ROTTOEN TO THE CORE////
I DONT FUCK WHORE'S BUT I DO ABUSE WOMEN WITH SEMEN////
THIS IS ONLY A WARNING NEVER TEST THE ILL RAP DEMON////
YOU CAN OFTEN HERE THE SOULS OF VICTIMS SCREAMING FOR LIFE'S MEANING////
IM SEARCHING FOR BODIE'S LIKE IM THE DEVIL'S HENCHMAN////
I BEAT OLD FOLKS WITH A OLD BLOODY WRENCH MAN///
IM INSANE I MEAN GODDAMIT I CAN'T STAND IT///
BUT I MANAGE TO INFLICT MAJOR DAMAGE WHEN I SPIT QUICK////
I MEAN I SPIT FASTER THAN O.D.B DRINKS MALT LIQOUR////
VERBALLY DISMANTLE YA FACE WHEN I REPEADIDLY KICK YA////
THIS IS A FREE STYLE I DONT KNOW HOW MANY BARS////
I CAN KEEP GOING CAUSE THIS SHIT AINT THAT HARD////
I GOT DEAD PEOPLE HANGING ON CROSS'S IN THE BACK YARD///
TO KEEP PEOPLE FROM TRESSPASSING MY CREW'S THE HORROR SQUAD////
THE CONE COLLECTOR'S I GOT MORE FLESH EATING GADGETS THAN THE INSPECTOR///
IM TRYING TO DISECT YA LIKE DEAD ANIMALS IM THE RAP HANNIBAL LECTOR////
EATING RAW FLESH BITING MY JAWS THROUGH MESH VEST'S DIGGING RIGHT THROUGH YOUR CHEST////
THIS SHIT IS FUCKIN UNSTOPPABLE BUT FOR RIGHT NOW IT'S LAID TO REST////

kill the caps...

end rhymes are a ok / generic scheme but long lines dont work well with them...

plus it makes your scheme too predicable...ya opener is funny though Thug/Neon...hilarious