sup dawg rules:
25 lines max
no d/r
no crew / hate votes
3-0 KO
5 votes to win
ill spit first gimma 5 mins

ill spit first this shit wont take too long DaMoon//
yo raps are comical they should be in some kiddies cartoon//
ima fine tune yo ass leaving you gasping for air//
to get a kicking like dis one is extremely rare//
yo prob a white rapper who's a wanna be nelly//
sittin jackin off wit yo sky box to ignition by r kelly//
yo freestyle careers at breaking point, yo gonna crack//
your careers like yo spits man, utter meaningless wack//
ima smack yo white ass back to tha ice-age//
that or ill line yo up wit ma 9mm guage//
ima put your sorry ass to rest an' use ma animal instinct//
im already surprised a wack like you aint exstinct//
a seen you up the precinct, your eyes n da cops linked//
You snitchin n bitchin your like a splinter in ma head that keeps itchin//
im gonna leave you now to recover from this ass kicking//
cmon dawg bring your thing to da king of freestyling//

yo yo DaMoon check in an' spit man............................................... ....
100 shit BLAH TO RB .................

cmon dawg u pre-writin shit or wot, spit up................................................ ...........................

why am i even wastin my time writin back to this coward
Black Plague? more like a plague of shit an best believe u gon get showered
my rhymes cant be snatched like stealin crack from atics
well maby by u, a pussy who steals virginity from faggots
i think u r mistaken nigga im not white u got my confused for ya bitch
a mix matched couple who's animated yall worse than lilo & stitch
i engrave it in yo brain,yeah, my mark is permanent
fuck this battle this niggas pussy, next, whos turn is it
u migit dick, takin after ya dick head
just look at this pussy's pick-yeah enuff said
see i let these punches fight 4 me aint no need 4 me 2 thow one
i see u take after Monica Luinsquy so just take R.Kelly's dick and blow one
theres no need for me to lecture and no need 4 u to question
a grown man homeboy u just a horny adolesence
where are u dawg u hidin i can see u beevin and wabblin
u a pro at it though-bet u took lessons from bin laden
so fuck tha AK i hit u lirically leave da gun on da table
keep dreamin you'll neva make it ya u barley get a pussy's lable
so there u go hope ur happy you've offically been clapped
heres a finger pussy fuck you! moan and groan on that

aight uppin for votes.uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
lets get some votes coming in on this
my bad if i took too long

DaMoon came with some good, long shit. Much harder punches like:
my rhymes cant be snatched like stealin crack from atics
well maby by u, a pussy who steals virginity from faggots

Haha If I could vote, DaMoon would get it.

good shot homy...lets get sum votes in here people.
uppin uppin uppin uppin for votes
uppin uppin uppin uppin for votes

uppin for votes ya'll,,,,,,,,,,,,,, a'll return favour if ye got a battle............................................ ......

I'll vote at this battle if you go check out my battle
and tell me who you think won thats all I 'm askin............................................. ...............


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1462#post431462

this was a close battle but I have concluded that

my vote:da moon

Won for better punches and better wordplay

thats me poll voted up your man vote up here...... uppin for votes.........................................

good shot dawg
still upping for more votes
c'mon people check this shit out
uppin for votes
uppin for votes

yo my vote is DaMoon. The nigga had more punchlines and better wordplay as said before. Plague, you ahd some punches but they werent as good as Moons. anyway DaMoon got this one.

VOTE= DA MOON