Many Things Can Be Taken To Heart,

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..::Love::..

[color=light black]Love can Start Off Lonely and Deathly Afraid, But There Is Many Ways
Under-privelleged and Over Played. All These Feelings To Evade
The "First Time' he is excited , but she is scared and Shaded
They Talk it Over her Thoughts Are Raided but after all she is Persuaded
Three Weeks Later She Takes The Test Cuz Her Cycle Has Not Come
She Watches The Dot Change Colours and Fear Begins to Make her Numb
The Man and Father Had Bolted After that magical OnE Night Stand
She Found him and He Said " The Condom Broke, This Was Not Planned"
This Woman I Speak Of In This Rhyme Is Still Strong and Very Brave
But The Man Who Got Her Pregnant Lie Very still in His Grave
So Next Time If Give Your Girl A Rose, Make Sure Theres No Thorn
Cuz If You Cross Her, You'll Feel Her Wrath and Deadly Scorn
That Very First Time A Girlz Legs Start To Open and Soon Depart
You Better Call The Day After , Cuz She'll Take It To Heart[/color]


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...::Friendship::...

[color=light black]As You Hear The Cries After A Beloved One Dies
The One That Would Advise Without Needing a Disguise
Your Brain Starts to Clutter and Your Heart Starts To Flutter
You Try To Speak But All You Can Do Is Gasp and Stutter
So many Things Overlooked and Not Noticed Or Mentioned
You Have No Comprehension of the Dimension of Tension
The Love Of Two People , Had Been Child Hood Friends
One Transcends Over The Other and They Never Made Amends
One Wants To Restart the Friendship And Is Very Ambitious
The Other is Propitious, But Towards the Friend Is Malicious
He's Talkin Shit ,He Dont Know When To Finish or Start
So The "Friend" Kept Talkin Until It Was His Time To Depart
So He Put The gun To His Chest ... He Couldn't Restart
Through His Tear Stained Eyes, I Watched His Life Fall Apart
As He Keeled Over... The Bitch Had Took It To Heart[/color]

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Three Weeks Later She Takes The Test Cuz Her Cycle Has Not Come
She Watches The Dot Change Colours and Fear Begins to Make her Numb
The Man and Father Had Bolted After that magical OnE Night Stand
She Found him and He Said " The Condom Broke, This Was Not Planned"
This Woman I Speak Of In This Rhyme Is Still Strong and Very Brave
But The Man Who Got Her Pregnant Lie Very still in His Grave

a love those lines a lot really good wordplay in them great twist at the end..so true lol

So many Things Overlooked and Not Noticed Or Mentioned
You Have No Comprehension of the Dimension of Tension
The Love Of Two People , Had Been Child Hood Friends
One Transcends Over The Other and They Never Made Amends

and that was heat felt....a think anyways maybe am readin too much into it

overall really ill drop a think n e ways..hope ya win in yo battle

holy shit man, thats fucking great, i'm speechless, never seen shit thats as pro as that

^^lol , thats my dawg in real life .... he just signed up so he could view that.... he dont get out much ... but yea thank for the comment bro

uppin for some comments on this open mic

I would think with as many open mics you post that the level would just fall off...

enjoyed this... consistently good open mics....

I know this isnt the place to do this but peep me vs 2 tyma in frontlines

werd homie that was tyte ..........PROPZ...........