aight dawg here goes tha shit

no d/r creww hater votes
many lines ya want
no feedin

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Aight and no crew voting

Start spittin



please hurry cause I wanna have my fun
and here my prediction I won

ur gay and go fvk cats in the arse.............................................. .................................................. ...........

charming.......... but hey dawg wot u got against cats, ill have u know their very squigy up the arse, quite gud feelin man.........

you set it up and a spit first
dont botha hailin a taxi bitch you leavin in a herse
Blood ova tha floor when you ran into ma knife
well thats wat ima tellin tha court when they try to do me fo life
see bitch i ouldnt waste me time on a nigga like you
you come in tha dozens but i come in tha fews
im notorious leaving scars where a hit
im coming strong with the gansta rappers shit
by now i probably got you stressin/guessin/ hopin
that tha croud gonna go easy when they find out that all you rhymes be is cheesy
i gotta admit that in tha past youve have some dope ass rhymes
but now youve met yo match and youll be doin tha time
for your mistakes of eva thinkin that you could battle wit me
time to rethink you actions nigga what it gonna be
you gonna stay here and try to fuckin beat me spit
well cmon asshole cause im waitin for tha bomb ta hit
still waitin damn you takin notes or sumtin
i suggest you spit back and stop wit all the ass pumpin
you fuckin messin wit ma crw its like you askiun tobe killed
and i will die mayself if someone calls yo rhymes 'ill'
the only thing that will be 'ill' will be yo health when im done
staring blankly at ma face as i point at you wit ma gun
say yo prayers nigga casue tonite you gonna die
last thingyou year a gun shot and last thing you say ma nine
say goodbye to all yo homies to yo mama an yo gurl
not that theyll miss you though cause they already stepped right in ma world
respect yo for tryin though you gotta a lotta guts/but my spits ova/time to shoa nigga what yo got

lol plague man funni shit...werent complaini last night though biatch :P only playin yo dawg hit me up wit that shit bout us doin a duo man aight peace

Yo Panther personally you've proved that your writing skills are lacking.

Anyways mY turn


Intro
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I deamed supreme intellect, watch as me and skill intersect..../
Then beat you in front of a mirrow just so you can reflect..../
Expect nothing but professional legible I flow incredible..../
Ya verbals are edible, that's why I turned this fruit into a vegetable..../

Warming up
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For you this battle's like newbie freeposting it's hard to find a vote..../
Your lines are jokes, you have to be blind because he can't find hope..../
You don't use ya head bro, this ain't Nintendo, so just let go..../
You the type to spit off a mountain and embarrass ya echo..../
Your so wack - ain't suited for this, huh? Losin' it quick..../
You betta retreat and start recruitin the wimps, your rap career is like a Historian, no future in it..../
Just because you think you light the green up, don't make you nice..../
The only roll up you've seen are the seams of sleeves on Miami Vice.../

It's Over...
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Honestly, I don't know what's wors - ya comments or ya VERSE..../
Leave you Immersed, you keep going back like your stuck in reverse..../
Smash his body and rip him apart till he's one big mangle..../
Twist his spine untill he's in the form of an acute angle..../
I spit deadly on Pledge's head, grapple his adams apple, tear his wind pipes and smash his vocal cords..../
Strangle and dangle his larainx, till he passes out, rip out his eyeballs, and gash his membrain till de-calls..../

Finishing Touch....
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I've ripped out his lungs and I'm playing keep away so he tries to catch his breath..../
He doesn't realize he's dead, he has just been visited by death....//


Yo thanks for this chance Pledge it was fun..

yo btw....ama femcee..just thought youd like to kno that................................uppin ppl uppin

vote=josh
creative lines but some places you fucked up with rhymes but still got it
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yo josh nigga u caught man ive found websites wit dif lines of your, you been snatchin off sites dawg, for example:
You betta retreat and start recruitin the wimps, your rap career is like a Historian, no future in it..../
look on http://www.dre2001.com/bboard/forum/1336127_flat.html
and about half way down a post by ready to kill nigga
check his lines.
dude yo a fake lil bitch.

same with hsi line Just because you think you light the green up, don’t make you nice dude ur suck a faggit get yo own skills this shits lame!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pledge shud get this yo a fake !!!!!!!!!

you cudnt even atleast disguise the fact u ripped it, and u ripped from sites on search engines u absoloute wacko!!!!!! god think ill have a lil look for more lines uve ripped