Just a Battle ..
10 bars ..13 max -- understandable
i'll post first ... i really dont care
all verses due May.21 --

wheneva you ready lil smokey

sign in..

check imma post verse in 5 min.

aight .. im postin first -- so im about to write this real quick

ayo lil smokey look I’m the best-that-is-known when I stepped-in-this-show why can’t you just leave-it-alone//
Why post? No one reads your lines anyway like CREDITS at the end-of-a-show//Cuz I blew you away with caps from various mags//
like walkin in Blood and Crip wars wrapped in American flags//
But look though Here's some food for thought, I'll knock ya teeth down till you ingest wisdom//This isn’t just a threat, It's an order for you to take out//
I serve bullets and losses, so take this with you on the way out//
Sliced and diced, shock covers you with battle scars//
You need to take-classes cuz I’ve seen harder PUNCHES inside of KOOL AID PACKETTS//
Cuz this battle is like typin passwords, your punchin, but only seein *****( stars )//

Yo, NICE VERSE............................................. .................................. will hit this up when the other dude is done............. stay up playaz

check this man rappin ta "shock the world" with no talent ,
hand you a super glued mic ta keep you silent /
"lil smokey" choke ya with verbal fumes dat violent ,
i let you repeat of my own mic...... it'll knock ya out of a~line~ment /
i rewrite ya verses like a lyrical bible turned to a game of scrabble ,
blah blah blah dis man does nothing but babble /
pointy verses pointed at you like verbal knives stabben ,
sweep kick ya child hood dreams of being a emcee- ya still not standing /
i feed dis newbie a case of "RED BULL" and he is still not elevating , ( suppose to grow wings )
send this man to hip hop boot camp and start his training /
in this game he stands about as tall as his avatar,
rip dis cat wit only a few bars~scars him~ never a star /
this man is from michigan~ what kind verse will we hear ,
he spits of a beat of his guitar, voice crackles like he swalloed a spear /
as clear as day this man'll shed us a tear ,
imma give you these 10 pointers like a trophy buck deer /
this man got ass one time cause the hood freak drunk a 5th and a case of beer ,
spit ghastly tunes that confuse ya body into a state of fear /......
.............................:::::::::::::::FINISH ER:::::::::::::::.......................
you just plain silly~ i rap ( wrap ) dis man like a philly,
send smoke out da mic like mustard gas dat make ya spine feel chilly /

holla

yo you still did not post this battle right~
you have to check start a battle also~
redo it and paste your verse there~
i will do the same~
holla 1 ~

I ll hit this up soon hit up mine b4
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5160#post445160