you can't ration life unless you can imagine death.//
black, endless, no need for breath, never opressed.//
just lowered beneath dirt, or burned, ashed spread.//
at-last at rest, reincarnation re-lapse of last steps.//
crash then, it's that fast, years pass then fears end.//
tears shed turn to pretend cheer, eyes shine bright.//
but underneath lies hate, anger and spite.//
create a dagger or knife, who's to blame for this right.//
a shameful desire, a burning need to escape from the fire.//
a urning to understand the underhand and other lands.//
--style switch-- more choppy flow
but on the other hand
some will stand
some will fall
some will wish
some will stall
--smooths out here--
through punishmment all will perish
fabled gods cherished
in hopes that it isn't all in vein
came here bald, bearing all our shame
grew up in a life of war and corruption
a sorry production
abduction, homocide in homes beside
genocide against friends and alies
pretend promises, hopes all die.
it chokes my mind thinking of the lies told
how through the bible we're wearing a philosophical blind-fold
running through life with our eyes closed
the only compromise is a kind soul.......

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Deep shit dawg i liked it, especialy the style switch in the middle it really upped my concentration

Keep it up G ...

Pz

I don't know why these cats hate on the greatest... all of us rock the fuckin' shit outta posts, but they still sleep. Anyways, nice thread kid. Fuckin' hot, as usual...

you guys is sleeping again.. I will return the favor.. I'm just sick of replying and having peeps not respond to mine

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