A story from another time thought in another rhyme/

Lyrics suspended suspensfully but thought out intensively in the mind/

Paper friction from pad to ink I'm a rare breed of emcee in fact I'm extinct/

Dying breed like the Dinosaurs half man half carnivore eatin emcees deliverin right to your door/

Your in store...for your jaw to drop down to the floor from what you saw/

Many more not many men have evidence of my rap styles benevolence/

Human hatred cannibalistic presence racism not towards blacks but towards the essence/

Many lessons are being taught from the teachers that are bein bought/

And you sought to find a life of crime robbin your lifetime's right to shine and being caught/

From the very start you will embark on your journey's cause/

When you think that you jus gained but you really lost/

Stock market risin fast Economy surprisin street demise the president's lyin/

Can't you see dead country? No more us...Its just them...Immagration benefited to the president like teenagers and masturbation/

Takin loot, Kids that shoot what has country come to when we cant enjoy our lives and we get the boot/

English spoken rarely much..Cant stare at each other cant even touch/

In a world of such, Ladies pay the tab, no more dutch, Broke ass take ya lady home in the cab/

No respect..human defect ignorance and intelligence something that you would expect/

But no such luck take down ya pants and fuck, No more talkin you choose where the pool house or the truck/

Gentleman losing, Bad Guys win but in the end Gentleman winnin the battle from the sin/

Lets begin to see what I can do, E-Nig stop your cryin playa heres a tissue/

Blunt MC audio victory but on text you aint nothin but a spell check fake emcee/

Sick of cryin bitches stop ya whining I'ma redrum ya backwards like that movie shining/

Cause Bmack dont hate but I dont appreciate the way you guys come off weak and a expect a great..

Congratulate? I anticipate like nostradamus that facing me and Bash was not a mistake thats honest/

Tellin lies you're on trial in a state of denial that your rhymes are becomin final/

B.R.E and The Mack odds against you in this lyrical attack/

So stand back watching is all you do cause in this battle you are through/

No need for discussion lyrics cause concussions gettin dizzy from the flow funny feelin from the head down to your toes/

Loss of circulation, Oxygen deprivation your down for the count from a knockout devastation/

Time's runnin out Toronto and D.C comin together Best of Both Worlds? Nah fake rappers praising B.E.T/

Thats all you are Wannabe Ghetto Superstar in a hoopty car..Mother sluttin in toronto spreadin S.A.R.S in a nudie bar/

Flow silly but danger smelt, Can't come back stronger even with the rhymes you dealt/

Been tossed by Bash, The Blunt is cashed.E-Nig got whipped ..Now all you faggots keep your mouth zipped/


Silence spoken oxymoron, Only time your tough is with your P.C on.../

Your punches are slaps Give you a spinal tap, Your repuation declined Like Cyndi Lauper I'm hot time after time/

So you continue this heartfelt R Kelly shit cause this song is dissin but we know who'll be re-remixin/

So say your words show off and boast/

Cause only two plus you read your last post/

Say Good Night Sleep on your Craftmatics/

Realize no one wants to hear Blunt and E-Nig-Matic/

Yeah nice flow dawg ...

This was a tight piece dawg ...

Keep it up G, yo check out my freestyle called True Love ! ! !

Pz

Thanx..see uppin...

Nice ish dawg...................................Keep dissing dem bitches

Hey man all they do is bitch, So they get treated like bitches

haha this aint just an opinion this is a fact, a majority of "bitches" i mean ahh... girls are, bitches! not hatin all them girlz out there but still can relate to this piece bad!!
keep spittin
peace out...

Thanx ...uppin

k man. this was very nice. good vocab and some nice lines, but bit muddled in parts like keep changing subject matters which is aight if u establish a link

Gentleman losing, Bad Guys win but in the end Gentleman winnin the battle from the sin/

Lets begin to see what I can do, E-Nig stop your cryin playa heres a tissue/

Blunt MC audio victory but on text you aint nothin but a spell check fake emcee/

and dat bit daint seem 2 flow right n all, ya flow was superb in some places but kinda off in aprts but i dont know how u rap this shit

great drop still
Eborted verdict- 7.5/10

nice 1 dawg


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u know wot 2 do

thankz
peace