rules:
10 lines
no dick ridin votes
no crew votes
no hata votes
none of that other shit neither
just spit
i'll spit first.

i fuck ya bitch/ every day. and she ain't got shit to say/cuz my dick be deep down in her throat/ take anymore, an she'll be dead/ niggaz tryin to figger it out like "MURDER SHE WROTE"/ niggaz won't vote fa me/ cuz they too blind to see that other rappin niggaz out there ain't got shit to me/ you'z a "PENNY" a in a bag quarterz,/you makin me teach you a lesson a "HARDAWAY"/nigga throw ya cue cards away/all that pre-written shit ain't gettin you nothin anyway/ nigga you can't touch me/ i'm "UNTOUCHABLE", ya rhymin is wack/ ya need to get ya ass back school/ learn da rules/ and don't fuck wit an angry nigga/or i'll send a bullet ya way

SPIT NIGGA, OR DID I GIVE YOU A SCARE
THIS SHIT'LL KNOCK THA HAIR OFF YA CHEST
PUT YA PUNK ASS TO REST. TRYIN TO FUCK
WITH THE BEST. TAKEOVA GON' MERK YA ASS, LIKE
YOU WAS A TURK

ya shit is aight...but I wanna see da otha nigga spit b4 I decide...but as for you, u need more metaphors and more rhymes, it was hard to follow ya flow...so just work on that a lil and you'll be aight