16 bars max
deadline monday
you post first for replyin

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=46931

hit me up & i'll vote when this drops

i post on sight..this "kids scared" like he's seen a "monsta",
i'll "kill" a "mike" , fatal what makes u think i won't lace up and stomp ya,
as i presume to snap...grab ya head and press ya back in,
u'll pop and crack...then collapse from "fatal actions",
see i "oversee"(outer space) u son "marz" is "building" an "empire" so watch me sky like "stackhouse",
so i saw this "pussy" then "baged" the flow before he could even "let this cat out",
i hold the ruger do u know what 9mm can do to u,
oh u the "shit" well i'm rapbattles own personal "pooper scooper"
i'll impale this kid wit a pen i'll blow his backoff,
fatal u couldn't "beat me" if u "applyed" and they "laid jack off",
my bars r.i.p. god made me a starr before spliff,
u come off hard but we all know yur soft as silk,
a "serial killa" u don't believe u'll get my "drift",
when your found wit out a sound drowned in 2% "milk",
final words:

u can let go or let this boil over like volcanoes,
when attackin i prove my actions are very fatal,

uppin for fatal


i got niggas on the block tryin to get to that big payroll,
u got niggas on the block all they do is fuck wit legos,
-marrzz cutta-

i don't rap and i dn't know marrzz

back up for fatal ations

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i got niggas on the block tryin to get that big payroll,
u got niggas on the block all they do is play wit legos,
-marrz cutta-

i don't rap and know i don't know marrzz

i'll post today, but you don't want me to

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check it,

I'll cut you some slack since you're new here, even though ya shit was rehearsed/
BAttlin Fatal Actions when ya quote is tighter than ya whole verse/
Everything about him's a lie, his verse? he really don't mean it/
Cutta even lies about where his from, cause bitches originated in Venus/
He claims he's from Mars, my verses pack mixture like the Mavericks from Dallas/
HE lacks the talent, left one board now Rapbattles tossin his salad/
This dude is garbage, no way in hell Marz gone defeat these rhymes/
When this dude is the only emcee alive to still use "beat me" lines/

Just dropped somethin simple!

i wasnt really feeling either of the flows ... butFatal was more complex and shit.... so im gna have to go with him on this one

hey yo ill vote up this shit, if u hit up my battle with Ego. just vote on the best battle no dick ridin shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=47886

seein as how it took 5 days for u to write for this i don't feel defeated...nice written though fatal nice

^^^^uppin for votes

^^^lol

I didn't have to write, i typed it in like 5 minutes

uppin

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I have to go with Marzz...
I liked both rhymes, but Marzz hit a bit harder and had this funny ass line...

"i'll impale this kid wit a pen i'll blow his backoff,
fatal u couldn't "beat me" if u "applyed" and they "laid jack off",

Marzz

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well I don't know
aside from that I'm still not able to fuckin' vote
I'd say the first didn't make a real sense
the punches were kinda wack
I'm mean this mothafucka spitted 16lines
and got killed by the half (fatal kicked 8)
so it's obvious: fatal had better punches
fuck it

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thats what i thought

vote fatal