alright, son . . .

15-20 lines
first to 5 (only explained poll votes count)
no d/r
no hate votes
no crew votes
no feedin'
no recyclin' . . .

spit . . .

Fuck it, I'm gonna be busy with work all day and won't have time to keep checkin' for your verse so I'll spit first.

Peep it . . .

X’s response to my callout was delayed like echos, he needed time to pre-write his rhymes//
Don’t deny it son, I kept on checkin’ to see if anyone accepted and there mad views but no replies//
I don’t even need to see you on a track to know you’ll never run shit, you lack hustle//
You shouldn’t have fucked wit’ Meta but now it’s too late - you’re TRAPped like a back muscle//
X could be Jim Jones and couldn’t serve a fatal punch, who the fuck is this little kid gonna be spittin’ and dissin’?//
“A-wait the execution?” – well here it is so peep your avatar cause the grenade is there put the pin is missin’//
you couldn’t even recite a “NYSE” line if your verse was nothin’ but stock quotes// (NY Stock Exchange)
and don’t even mention the last round - those were d/r’s, otherwise known as cock votes//
I’ve looked up and down the Production’s roster and I see more pussy than James Bond and tampons//
I don’t mean to be “hard on” X but this is the dick (pointing downward) that everyone in his camp is on//
I’m a real PRICK so every punch thrown draws blood, <--- you probably need help to understand this//
Here, let me try – go against metaphysical and you’re contra-DIC-tin’ yourself like a satanic islamic//
Even if X wrote on the back of the “Ready to Die” album cover you couldn’t find “respect” in his verse//
You’ll probably want a reminder of metaphysical so X Ecution here’s what’s left of your skrit//
I don’t even need to see X’s response to know he’ll only throw generic punches like some cheap Hi-C//
They’ll be ambiguous like his sexuality - like getting’ someone else’s mail they won’t even be directed to me//
even the mods know you have no chance at this, “why did X accept” they wonder – you’re inferior!//
But they wanna save you so every time you try to submit your verse it says “text to short, not 100 characters”//
Fuck these front lines, the only place you’ll ever beat me is a parallel universe, somewhere adjacent to the matrix//
I'm a free agent so tell Knightshade to pm me or Keannu Reeves cause the Production’s are gonna need a “replacement”//

. . . 20 lines . . . spit . . .

All he ever does is spit bull shit, I never see him landin' a punch/
I see right through this kid i'm "shittin bombs on his verses" like when the Germans bombed the Dutch/

he says fuck me, but he was beggin to be let in on my knowledge, little cock roach/
Im bout to get more consecutive votes, than you got replies and posts/

this bitch goes and changes his flow thinkin my punches will only scratch the surface?/
look at this pussy, only the 4th line this faggot already gettin nervous/

this guy is a virgin both lyrically and phsyically he's a celibate member/
cause the only thing this guy know about sex is the difference of the genders/

I'll rip you to bits and pieces, Im' first class shit, your fuckin' thrifty/
They say the good die young, so how does it feel to be one hundred fifty?/

But to your benefit I'm not here to start-problems/
The reason I took this battle is to introduce you to the loss-column/

you too boring to faze, all of his war-stories-are-gay/
It's really too bad another vet's bout to get killed right after Memorial Day/

Your rhymes contain no multies, nor any punches, punk, all of ya sets is redundant/
The only way this kid'll ever be "full-of-punches" is when my fists "connect-with-his-stomach"/

You steady being hit by my punches, fuck a ballpoint, i'm an "animal" coming at you with "felt-tips"/
Your gayness must've stemmed from "Boston", cuz sucking dick at a rap concert is the only way you'd ever "sell-tix" (Boston Celtics)/

Your rapbattles first "woman", yea bitch, that's u/
You fuckin wit me? Watch me "clean-necks"(Kleenex) with your own "tissue"/

alright ya'll . . . poll votes . . .peep this and we'll objectivey check out yours . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .

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aight lemme say this..

Meta's ILL Lines..

I’ve looked up and down the Production’s roster and I see more pussy than James Bond and tampons//
I don’t mean to be “hard on” X but this is the dick (pointing downward) that everyone in his camp is on//

Lmao..That was a ILL Personal..


Even if X wrote on the back of the “Ready to Die” album cover you couldn’t find “respect” in his verse//
You’ll probably want a reminder of metaphysical so X Ecution here’s what’s left of your skrit//

This was aight too..seen it b4..but u flipped it nice..

and your finisher was tight

Fuck these front lines, the only place you’ll ever beat me is a parallel universe, somewhere adjacent to the matrix//
I'm a free agent so tell Knightshade to pm me or Keannu Reeves cause the Production’s are gonna need a “replacement”//

But, i mean you started slow..then around the middle it got good, and then it kinda got filler..

Overall...Preety good verse..6.5/10

X ecution
I'll rip you to bits and pieces, Im' first class shit, your fuckin' thrifty/
They say the good die young, so how does it feel to be one hundred fifty?/ --that was sick..Nice shit..

you too boring to faze, all of his war-stories-are-gay/
It's really too bad another vet's bout to get killed right after Memorial Day/..Illness.

Your rapbattles first "woman", yea bitch, that's u/
You fuckin wit me? Watch me "clean-necks"(Kleenex) with your own "tissue"/..Lol..Its kinda played..but..somehow it sounded funny..

Sicc Verse..Overall 7/10

I would of given this to meta, but his line structure is fucked..and his lines are too long...X had it short and sweet, with some killer lines..

Sicc battle by both tho..props..

V-X

Peace
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^^^^^^^^^I HAVE TO Say WELL EXPLAINED..........X EDGED THIS.....WIT BETTER VERSE OVERAL VERSE

The other guy stretched his .....verse....but nice both verses i enjoyed reading it

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This was a tight battle. Enjoyed really both. It was a pretty hard choice fo me but imma have ta go wit X on dis one. he had better punches not by much, and I liked his wordplay. Keep elevatin dawg. Meta had good punches too, but not as hard as X's one. Not hatin or anything. Good battle ta both.

vote=X Ecution

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Yo X, can u do me a favor and return da favor. My battle has been gettin slept on and ignored madly. All I need is one more simple poll vote and it's done wit. Thanx.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

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yeah i gotta say both had some dope lines
but X had a few better punches that......just edged past metas
X also had better flow
overall this was dope but vote to X
and they pretty much explained it above^