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Old 05-20-03, 12:02 AM   #1
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Exclamation Easier Said Than Done...

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alright well i havent written in a while but heres something i wrote...


It's easier said than done, thats where I'm all confused
I see you with your unexcepting eyes, that's why I refused
Tempted but foolishly I took a step back
Your smile was in my grasp
Your colone wiped my face as you passed
I was left with Hope at the sudden moment
You looked back, checked me out, but what was meant?
A season died nowans another one blossomed
Surprised it's still You i want and i feeling lonesome
Obsessed? can't be
Sprung? maybe
I want to attempt a Hello because I know I have nothing to lose
"Just go for it!" as my inner conscious would chose
I'm scared,I'm nervous, but anxious like any other fool
His world of sight to tense to connect with mine own, I feel I have alot to prove
But PROVE what?
My looks, my personality, or just my quality as a person?
If that is the only way, then so be it!
But who says I'm changing?
I could careless and find someone better that's all I'm saying
But the doubts, the doubts is what eats me
If I don't attempt then who will?
Why am i stressing, what's the deal?
Man this funny, I should just say What's up to the dam guy and just move on
But then again...
It's easier said then done!!!


Well there it is....holla back wit ya replies...thanks

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Old 05-20-03, 12:10 AM   #2
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I feel you on this one~ i had wrote somethin kinda this before..

>Tempted but foolishly I took a step back
Your smile was in my grasp
Your colone wiped my face as you passed<

i think that was my favorite part, cuz i could jus picture it~ like, damn he smell good! but yea, i liked it, it was raw, ill read more of ur drops, keep doin what you do~
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Old 05-20-03, 08:03 PM   #3
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hey thanks fo tha reply
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Old 05-23-03, 02:39 PM   #4
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Only one reply to this one I slept on it too. Sorry about that. It was good though. I liked how it read like your thoughts. You did a lot of wondering about yourself and questioning yourself in it. I like that type writing.

"My looks, my personality, or just my quality as a person?
If that is the only way, then so be it!
But who says I'm changing?
I could careless and find someone better that's all I'm saying"

That was my fav part out of it. I'm glad you won't change just to get some guy to like you.

"But the doubts, the doubts is what eats me
If I don't attempt then who will?
Why am i stressing, what's the deal?
Man this funny, I should just say What's up to the dam guy and just move on
But then again...
It's easier said then done!!!"

I liked that part of it too. This was a good writing. Keep posting more. I won't sleep no more :P
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