I wrote this a while back and pledgeforpanther posted it for me on open mic. Got suggested to post it on here, so here goes...

Time is full of obsessions and relations, which add up to make the fragments we call life
Some find them important others let them slip by
Every thing reverses as people grow older
Growin up and growing down, always getting harder
When you watch life pass you by it seems like a life time
But after it all youll feel like it flew by
time is a dimension we may never understand, but it will always be around.
Questions of how it started, will never be found
time wasted, is time's biggest crime.
But as wel live our lives we look back over time
But forward is where were goin, never knoing just where well end up what the outcome will be
But if we all knew these things thre would be n such mystery
Yall ma feel life bne pointless but it’s the way that we heal
You must swallow yo gut and move forward, be free
Open yo heart and bare yo soul to tha world
Take those crucial steps forward and let your life unfold

uppin... don't sleep on me...

aight nix :P
good flow going with it, had some good feeling to it, vocab was reasonable too///// look forward to seeing more from you....
~out~

Ta farl heh heh. uppin

*giving up hope* uppin...

lol, sorry Nicanda. I thought you would get more responses here but it looks like you did better in open mic. I could always respond to it again if you want