***holds a picture of tha most beautiful girl in his life... thinks back to all tha great times... throws on a mellow beat and starts spittin...***

She got unmarred success, but what gets-me-past-her-feats,
She’ll knock out your eyes cuz awe struck em, like a Da Vinci-masterpiece,
Inflicting-Caspers-knees, shakin’ them tectonic-plates,
Her crystal clear baby blues, leave me in a hypnotic-state,
My ironic-fate, is sealed like magnets opposites-attract,
Tha artist and tha rapper, amazed by her composite-abstract,
On-top-of-it-is-that, her skin’s smoother then her brush-mark,
She’s known as highly flammable, just because her touch-sparks,
She’ll crush-hearts, of unsuspecting playa’s with-ease,
With tha meekness of tha mountains, and their beauty that’s pristine,
Tha stiff-breeze, of a Chinook can’t compete-with-her-sort,
Her smile alone resonates, more heat-and-more-warmth,
A treat-from-tha-north, but not innocent she plays cruel-tricks,
She leaves other “cracka’s” “nuts”, looking like they was caught by a mules-kick,
Your drool-drips, cuz she got more ass then in a horney-donkeys-dreams,
Shit got kissed, turned to a prince, that’s what tha story-of-me-reads,
Forty-young-Gs-plead, beggin’ her for an opportunity,
More desperately then mob snitches pleadin’ for immunity,
I spit-fluently, multiple love rhymes ripped faster-then-I-attract-her,
She’s amazing’ but I’m not jealous, just ask-her-I’m-tha-master


originally done for a collab, but tha other guy backed out so whatever
ya i know its sappy in parts lol but when i spit it to her it was worth it!

This is Ill as fuck

This flow was hot son keep up tha good work.

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A.K.A Werdz Worthless

yo thanx for tha support yall

hey do me a favor and head to front lines, im 1 vote away from losing a battle that i honestly dont think was even close in my favor. im down 4-2 i need some ppl who know what a good verse is to go over there and vote.

also keep critin this i like tha feedback

ill nice stuff...ha i thought the title was referring to ya penis lol........nice stuff

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Damn homie.....finally somethin fo da ladys....and good luck wit ur girl dawg, best wishes. Im a femcee myself and what u wrote is really ill...Keep spittin....Its real good

lol no its not referring to ths size of penis haha its refering to tha size of tha rhyme

upp

that was an ill verse. good vocab, flow, punchlines.
keep spittin