this was a collabo i'm writing with keezy, but since i aint got the green light to put up his verses im'a just put mine up that i wrote thus far.

its a story about 4 dead guys except one is kind of a spirit which roams the earth, look just read it, alright?

the fourth soul, stands tall with eyes that see's-all/
navigating the globe at top velocity like free-falls/
and won't be-stalled, the restless spirit, navigator, watcher/
immortal, in BC was a gladiator clocker/
he travels from country to country, place to place/
recording events that take place throughout the whole human race/
so lets shift the time line up to 2k3/
the location, italy, the watcher moves-bravely/
the sky cracks and lighting shoots, burning the dirt/
screaming masses fleeing, some struck, returning to earth/
the watcher gains focus calming the storm/
many dead, the crowds gather, the departed they mourn/
the light fades, the scene is calmed, the watcher travellers further/
to the deepest african jungle, looks for beasts you've never heard-a/
stories of man eating monsters from the voices of people/
to understand goodness, we've got to know pure evil/
thats why the watcher's always far apart from them/
at great distances he can read the hearts of men/
from hitler to ceaser, napoleon to stallin/
he counts the reasons that dictators need to be fallin'/
watcher's ready to diss these legions of zombie like men/
he instigates the wars needed to swiftly right them/
travelling to '45 he watches the third reich shatter/
then 4 decades after, the rebuilding might matter/
east and west reunited and then 10 years later/
the watcher moves to new york and see's many fierce haters/
the greatest emcees of all time are starting costal wars/
disrespecting each other, and now one coast will fall/
taking this all in, watcher shakes his head sadly/
this faking, this ballin', can only end badly/
with a sigh of regret, he leaves the scene of the crime/
and several bodies behind, the new york state of mind/


unfinished and keezy's verses double this in length, what do you think?