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Head over Heels

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Checking in, bla bla bla, 100 characters, bla bla bla, hey what do you think of my new addition to my sig

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gay..........but checkin in........u know i'm gonna rip ur shit wide open dont u...lol..............100....................and... .......................1

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Blessed wit Skillz

disciple is sitting in his house.....feet propped up on the coffee table.....watching the game and drinking a beer.....he sees a moving van pull up into the empty house across the street followed by a 2000 honda civic wit spinners.......looking out the window he sees the most beautiful woman step out the car.......his heart stops and he is left in awe......in his first time ever he lacked the courage to come up to a female.......thus was the beginning of a very emotional yearning.................


MOVING IN DAY EMOTIONS

oh my god an angel so beautiful her appearance so eloquent and petite/for the first did disciple fall head over heels nah disciple must've fell head over feet

am i havin a heart attack cuz it's poundin and my left side is goin numb/all the pigeons i been thru but this is the first thats ever left me frozen and stunned

should i approach? what should i say? what if i get served a reject?/i mean she gots the money and the power the only thing i could offer is my respect

i notice she's independent like she's another member of destiny's child/damn whats wit all this questionin my emotions is driving me wild

now i'm pacing? come on grow some balls and knock on the door/wait a minute i promised myself a long time ago i'll never again fall in love wit a whore.....

.....disciple stays in the house a couple of dayz.....workin his nerves up just to talk to her......finally he decides this is the day.....he takes a shower.......gets GQ wit it......and opens his door......


EMOTIONS WHILE WALKING TOWARDS HER HOUSE

it might've took dayz to build up the courage but this is the day to follow my heart/i know i said it before but this girl is different i know she wont rip it apart

i got a feeling...read a good horoscope..so i'm just gonna go wit my gut/yup yup....disciple this might be ur wifey but praying to god that shes not a slut

u almost to the door but wait a minute i never noticed a second ride/aahhh.....must be her mommy and daddy but it's time for disciple to put away his pride

damn nigga u doin i u knockin on the door cant wait to see what she says/i know i'm head over heels for this girl if i'm lucky it'll be legs over head

....door slowly opens......disciples heart beating.....wait a minute.....WHAT THE FUCK?!!.....whos this dude in a towel.....nah .....fuck this........


EMOTIONS OF THAT SITUATION

i'm lookin at this nigga lookin at me but he isn't feelin what i'm feelin/i'm so head over heels for this girl disciple knows theres gonna be a killin

smilin at me wit pussy on his breath nope i knew i just flew the coop/i tried to restrain from doin it but my mind told me to shoot

my emotions was uncontrollable as i ran in her crib/my angel
screamin while i was on top not understanding she was gonna be carrying my kid

i love u don't u understand but this isn't the way that it suppose to be/can u believe i'm tellin this story from hell cuz her man had enuff energy to come and kill me?........................................1

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Blessed wit Skillz

sick!!!!!!!!!that was some just plain ill shit!!!god damn........props......props...................... ...................

Setting: The Deep south, during the early civil rights era, in a small, white trash town....It begins with an African American crossing the Alabama border


I just made the long drive from Chicago that night
Crossed the Alabama border with sleep trying to fight
I pulled into a hotel and asked for a room
The lady said "No places for people like you!"
I was truly disgusted at the injustice that I was dealt
But I went into a gas station with the anger that I felt
The white girl at the counter looked like my girl back home
I said "Hey Baby, need a fill up on the car with the chrome."
She looked at me as though I was a ghost
and said "Your black ass is fucking toast!"
I was truly startled at what I had just heard,
So I ran back to my car, without saying a word
And before I could get a mile away from this god-forsaken place
The cops were already giving me a chase
They pulled me over and asked, if I had called his girl baby
I looked at him, tryed to remain calm, and then stuttered "M-m-maybe"
He said, "Get out of that car right now you fucking negro."
I turned around started to run and shouted "HELL NO!"
They caught me and beat me until I was bleeding all around
Drove up with the cops car, put me in the trunk, and drove me into town
I thought I'd be goin' to jail, so that I could plead my case
But it wouldn't happen, injustice was the only thing that I could taste
They took me to the middle of the town square to the largest tree there was
Took out a rope and said "You'll pay for your mistake in blood."
I couldn't believe what was happening, it was so fast, I was head over heels
And that's how they hung me on their tree, so injustice could be revealed.
Now are you shocked of what you heard, was it too gruesome, too gory
Or are you shocked because it's based upon a true story!
The white people in that Alabaman town, with the devil, they made a deal
And that is what leaves me right now, head over heels....

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....Aren't U WHite?.............Anywayz.....Good Drop I Guess............................................. ..............................................1

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Blessed wit Skillz

i really enjoyed both verses to tell ya the truth ...

i liked Disciples Rhyme Scheme and Multies...

and i really Enjoyed how Mad Man Flipped The Subject...

I Can Not Poll Vote...

Just Wanted To Give Props To Both Emcee'z

This Would Be A Hard One To Vote On... Luck To Both

Check My Vere Vs. Thug Whyte (also in RBTL)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52315

this was just.............

yeah.........

ill....

damned good from both....
13's connected just slightly better to me however...
so vote 13

damn, DAMN good drops though

return the favor and peep me in elite vs metaphysical one

agreed

MAn OooH MAN....................This hard......both were sick as hell i should label ya'll top 5 topical battlers feel me

but 13 edged this more multies yo

Vote 13

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breakdown:

flow-mad man
volcab- 13th
creativity- 13th
story-mad man

overall- since it's a tie in the mechanics i guess i'll pick the one i just liked the most and that was mad man's

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........almost there............................................. ........................1

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Blessed wit Skillz

like everyone said, this is so damn hard....
13th had a really interesting piece...didn't like his ending as much as liked his beginning.
Mad had an ill ending, and and ill beginning, but his scheme wasn't as good...

fuzuck....well, I'm going with mad man on this because of his intersting topic twist. Both verses were almost completly equal, but mad's take on the topic gave him the edge.

vote-mad man.

I know I'm gonna read this like ten times and change my vote as many, so I made the decision now.

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

Ok I Re-Read Them ... Mad Man Is My Boy , But I Liked 13Th Verse More...
Although I Did Like The Way Mad Flipped The Subject

Vote 13