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The Answer
IP: B967 916C
I know not what i search for
But i know i have yet to find it Because it is invisible to the eye My heart must search for it blinded And if by chance it is found Will i know my mission is acheived Can one come to conclusions Before the question is conceived Just as no one knows What lies beyond the shore I will never find the answer To what it is i search for. |
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IP: B967 916C
What d'ya think?
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IP: 4577 CD9A
I liked it! It was short and sweet! very nice..
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Light Weight
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IP: 640C 3FBD
You know, I felt like I was missing something in my life too. I never even found it..it found me. I was really feeling this writing. Very good.
"Because it is invisible to the eye My heart must search for it blinded" Those lines I really liked. What you're looking for isn't something like money, girls, cars, or anything like that. That's what those lines made me think of. "And if by chance it is found Will i know my mission is acheived" I liked those lines too. When what I was looking for found me, it hit me like a ton of bricks. I dunno what that has to do anything though.. "Just as no one knows What lies beyond the shore I will never find the answer To what it is i search for." Hopefully you'll realize what you're looking for. Good job here. |
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Eternal
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IP: 34A7 D1BF
thanks, hopefully...
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