iight lets go......rules r like this..........12 bar max...(2 lines = 1 bar)..........explained votes.........verses due in legible time.......lets get this on and poppin........1

checking in....
im going to write about
16 lines...
you can either match
me...or do your thing
i am going to
start now.....

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damn...every time we battle i orgasm.. your flow just sucks
hold it up ive been "awaitin X ecution" he aint never showin up!
your slow as fuck ...trying to read time?...what..personal lets see.
amazing the irony :tryin to rep Q BORO strong: but ya hella weak
and from the heart.. i have to say please dun switch tha flow son
because duble spaced bars with NO rythm aint hurt no 'ONE'
a line with no pun. lose a battle to a kat with no tounge im sick!
grenade in ya sig? .Quit Tryin To Blow UP. Stick to Blowin Dicks.
Porno Flick this pest TIP Desire respect? Jaw. Hold Shut..
We did tie last time...Now it looks as if your getting Roped Up
slow up lets think a sec and let the punchline commence ..next..
so ignorant a bum took his cup back while ya puttin in ya 2 cents
who let a kid like me stand up against you and proceed to shine through
because you could be a wall out in the open...0 COPS... no one would sign you!


umm..let ya know..

X made a comment about making
verses due in "legible time" accounts
for "dont read time..."

umm look at his location and custom title
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we battled a long time ago and tied...
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damn my flow is nice...haha..

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my words are like slugs piercen through you, bleedin non-stop like a baby tantrum/
once you read ma lyrics they open you up haven you holdn ya chest like the national anthem/

how you gonna try and use word play against me?/
ima hand you "2 L's" and once like "COOL J"/

ya rhymes are wack they aint on ma level of flow/
ma rhymes are crazy and "outta control" like "BEN WALLACE's FRO"/

fumble a dictionary and you still couldn't drop some vocab/
wanna fit in, but kid you don't belong anywhere like nomads/

callin yourself a lyricist, but your unworthy of such a title/
tryn to act hard but you'd fit in better at a playschool recital/

throwin lyrical tantrums like a child with behaviour "fit-for-a-clown"/
kid you could call yourself "prince" and i'd still be "favorite-for-your-crown"/

how about I "kick" you to the "curb" so you can be "down-with-the-streets"/
puttin out a contract on your life so like "saddam" your "bound-to-retreat"/

u were sayin your family were actors but i only ever seen them in homeward-bound/ (about dogs)
think "voters" are on your side but havin servants is the only way you could "own-the-crowd"/

and i know biting X's rhymes is your idea of a free-style/
another kid destroyed! what made you think you could compete-child?/

I Strip u naked, rape ur mother infront of u, so u can really "bare-witness"/
Bad luck, bitch U just got added to X's "X-Ecuted-LisT"/

voooooooooooooooooooooottttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeessss ssss

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VOTE...PLEASE


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punches:sand
flow:sand
multis:X
wordplay:sand
vocab:X
overall:sand

I had to break it down like that, because just looking at this, it was such a close battle. You both cam hard with sick verse. well done.
Peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

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mooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeeee vooooottes..................................

sorry for the freepost, but could you guys peep my battle vs Gizmo? We need some votes, and it looks pretty close to me.
much appreciated
peace

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she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

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Sand got this easily in my eyes,..

X's shit was played out like a whore..

Fumble dictionarys??...come on dun,.thats old..

sand was funny and personal..

so..

V goes to sand..

peace
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