10 quick lines
spit now, i'll follow up

iight dawg listen

a yo can dis cat takeova he must be dreamin, let his girl gimme brain so i can fuck what she thinkin/
And everbody kno dawg u a clown, rap battle or fist fight u get punched down/
we all kno u pussy datz why i brought the duck tape, let my bitch strap on a dildo ya azz get raped/
dont start bitchin just listen n play ya positin, my bullets assist niggaz worst then j kidd n transition/
so dat mean I aint likely 2 miss, and dawg even though u lost this battle dont get pissed/
you just fucked witt da wrong nigga, u out of ya league what i spit make more sense then vendin machines/
now u like dis cat really is DaTruth, got u sayin he just got in my azz like daisy dukes/
my lyrically punchlines got u weary, and dawg dont come back word 4 word out da dictionary/
imma gangsta nigga dont kno bout x's & o's never been a balla rena but u kno son i stay on my toes/
now everbody kno u got killed, my rymes so ill after this battle I suggest dis cat take a pill/

nigga u couldnt have a tight flow in ya dreams if u slept wit a wet suit//
i'll demolish all ya bros and sis house, cause im scuffin ya crowed ass big boot//(the old lady who lived in da shoe)
you'll neva get boo'd off stage cause i'll lyrically clap u//
u couldnt have no teckneck(teknique) in da forsaken garden even i put a whole in ya adams apple//
fuck wit dis, and i'll reach ya heart by openin ya chest like vicks//
my foots up ya ass like ya non ill lyrics, now u got shit stains on my icy white kicks//
my cooked rymes is hot like some fresh cake batter//
shatter ya cold shit wit a shotty........BOOM and watch ya shit splatter//
fuck ya arm, i'll rip out ya whole skeloten cause i had a bone to pick'em//
like tryin to stab a ghost, im spittn quick so its hard to stick'em//
u not famous,im big like a anceint cell phone, u suck like a ic kareem cone//
sendin electromagnetic waves that'll shatter ya bones, and i'll watch u as smoke and da smell of fried bacon rise from ya dome//

i said u spit first but i jus went for da hell of it, so i'd like u to follow up, like now

iight dawg lets wait 4 da results see who won dis shit

fuck a watch cuz my time is tickin/
fuck a chain im already hangin/
fuck a gang im already bangin/

styles p

Vote - takeova

This Battle Was Aight But Takeova Took This Because Of The Complexity Of His Punches.....They Were Well Worded. Truth, Seemed Like Your Shit Was Just Basic. Good Battle Though.

This System Is Fucked Up And Wont Let Me Poll Vote. It Says That I Aint Given An Explaination.......Fuck Knows Why.
Sorry Man.

good lookin on votin on dis shit, but i think the votin problemsssss are cause by the fact u use aol, maybe not, but dats a common problem, happens to me when on aol.....

still upppppppppin

...............a yo i give mad propz 2 both ya'll.............but yo on my name i cant vote.........srry.........and largehuman check ur pm box i sent u one...............

Yeah this was ight battle...I think both could have came harder.

Da truth packed punch but lines where played a little...
imma gangsta nigga dont kno bout x's & o's never been a balla rena but u kno son i stay on my toes/
now everbody kno u got killed, my rymes so ill after this battle I suggest dis cat take a pill/
I think this was a good closure...

But i do think takeova took this one, his wordplay was nicely
put..On this vote i'm going on better wordplay to takeova..
Punches i felt da same...

Nice battle came close...Much respect yeah..
Vote = thatakeova


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Both verses was ight....I've seen much better from thatakeova..............But he took dis one wit better wordplay.....

fuck wit dis, and i'll reach ya heart by openin ya chest like vicks//
my foots up ya ass like ya non ill lyrics, now u got shit stains on my icy white kicks//

that was my fav. line outta both of em....and its from thatakeova.....Nice man....haha funny too......

Vote-ThaTakeOva

Could ya guys go hit up mine wit Grim85 and *MoF*.....
I need some serious poll votes!!!!
haha
My verses are kinda, whack, not usually how i kick it, but these cats sucked, so i didnt wanna waste anything on em.....Thanks Dawgs......Keep it real.....

pppaaayyyccceee
Much love from da FemCee

Punches:datruth
Flow:thatakeova
Structure:thatakeova
Wordplay:thatakeova


I thought datruth came a lil stronger with punches but it just didnt roll like thatakeovas. nice verses for both of you

Vote:thatakeova

2things how do u type in colour and bold it out it looks more effective and sorry im 75 posts 2 young 2 vote.............................................. .........

i think takeova took it, but it was a close battle. it was tight on both sides.



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DIPSET MOTHERFUCKER!!

lol aint no fuckin way i lost dis battle niggaz trippin if i loss on dis shit i retire word iight im out 1 keep votin though 1 and good shit thatakeova 1