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Old 05-27-03, 07:02 PM   #1
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freestyle

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Yo...listen up to the sound..setting the flame alight
burning bright..glowing like a star at night
kickback...heavy..im spitting verbal attacks
trademarks....sarcastic remarks leaving ya'll on ur backs
u couldnt defeat me if u blew out ma flame and spilled me
Talkin thats all i gotta do to make ya fill me..
kill me its like a hope ur "wishing well"
ur gettin roasted like anglers chasing around all the fuckin fish in hell
ma rhymes will leave u naked like u were a new chipondale
As u listen to ma rhyme its like a diffrernt level like a fairytale
so yall gotta notice..this note is a like a fingerprint
Jambo 182 on the mic must be indefinite
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Old 05-27-03, 07:06 PM   #2
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what are you rapping about? LOL shit dont make since. instead of posting freesytles post a written nobody cares about freestyles on this site unless its audio
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Old 05-27-03, 07:10 PM   #3
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ill post whatever the fuck i wanna post

dont be bitchin now

i didnt do that to try and prove my skill...

just fuckin around

and ur feedback was shit...
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Old 05-27-03, 07:16 PM   #4
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then leave the site. what the fuck do you want? you think your going to come here and have everyone kiss your ass? your fuckin wack, if your wack we will tell you your wack,

if you dont give a fuck what people think then dont post, im sure everyone on this site agrees with me.

i hate you fuckin newbies that think your the shit and everyone must bow down to you cause you aint shit and we will run you out of this site fast you fuckin herb.

get the fuck out of here with the attitude, dont post your shit if you cant take critisium.
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Old 05-27-03, 07:17 PM   #5
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keep postin freestyles,it keeps you elevatin,it was tight other than the fact that it didnt have a direct point and it skipped around other than that you know how to put your words together,keep postin,peace kidd
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Old 05-27-03, 07:19 PM   #6
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And you think your the shit coz u aint a newbie?

fuck man..i aint beefing here..

i can take criticism but what u said didnt help any..at least say how u can improve nahmean

thinkin ur the shit coz u post stupid fuckin pics

u should be the one who gets the fuck of this site coz u only talk shit to peeps

stick to ur own shit in the future and leave me the fuck alone
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Old 05-27-03, 07:20 PM   #7
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thx diverse i know i aint great but ill stay practicin

later dogg
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Old 05-27-03, 07:28 PM   #8
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i aint beefing either, its hard to help you when your doing a freestyle about nothing, thats why i said do a written so we could see what you got, if you come here talkign about i dont care what peopl think then people wont care what you have to say.
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Old 05-27-03, 07:42 PM   #9
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i'll put it like this i aint no newbie to this site i like 3 or 2 years ago before they started rebuildin the shit so take what i have to say to heart your shit was wack the punchlines were weak as hell and didn't make since at all you really need to think before you write anything down that way we can't say your wack
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little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun
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